Open Poetry #29 |
Canvas Of Sky (Triple Haiku) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
~*~Canvas Of Sky~*~ ~ Sunrise of morning Beautiful canvas of sky Perfect masterpiece~ ~ Fall hues prevailing Sighing songs rising on breeze Autumnal Glory~ ~ Majestical views Partaking of this moment Yes, Earth Mother smiles ~ ~ It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-03-2003 10:12 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the beauty you captured, you captured well... nicely done my friend.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes, she smiles...on earth, on us, on you... I can name on two hands the number of poets who will love this one, Donna... What a beautiful wake-up call to the weekend. Thank you! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna~ Very nice appreciation... Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I didn't get to see it except on TV but the sunrise was a beauty this morning. Lovely write, Donna hugs M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna Dear, this is indeed the perfect masterpiece of autumnal glory!--and your gentle spirit shines through it all... Lovely beyond lovely... Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...oh my!! How beautiful Donna both in words and picture... Stunning!! Simply stunning! ~Heart Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Where was I ???? This is BEAUTIFUL~ Thank you sooooooooooooooo much for sending it to me~ Breathtaking~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely.....as you always do.... ME~ There's a song inside my soul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe at the beauty |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Donna she sure does and upon you, Oh My yes a beauty . . . *smile* xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Have I ever told you guys how much I love haiku? It's so..great. Thanks for this, it's going in my library. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
How beautiful. Thank you for this peaceful and serene feeling you have provided to such a stressful week. And what a lovely way to begin the weekend. Patricia |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Earth Mother and the rest of us. Beautiful and serene GS. Maree |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is spellbinding, sweet friend, and may Mother Nature always rejuvenate us each morning and at twilight with her relaxing spells of magic! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna....three beautifuls!! and you are too! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How very beautiful! (And I'm thanking Sunshine for linking me to this one.) Thanks Donna, for the beautiful canvas. You know, this is one of my favorite poetic forms. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit |
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