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Resonance
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Resonance I heard you singing then, the spirit sound of you, the unheard voice so small and resonant that any music would be crass, obtuse beside your very soul’s vibration And enthralled, captured, surrounded by the tones of you the knowing came, as sudden as a birdcall and as ancient; there within your spirit song I heard my own |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Your writings are so..amazing. just... library. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"the knowing came, as sudden as a birdcall and as ancient; there within your spirit song I heard my own" Ed...this is so softly beautiful... I love the 'feel' of it.  Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some things you feel, know, hear. I've learned to trust them and as in this case, to revel in the joy of them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And enthralled, captured, surrounded by the tones of you the knowing came, as sudden as a birdcall and as ancient; there within your spirit song I heard my own How incredibly lovely... I think your last two lines hold the secret for perfect unions... finding the best of yourself in another. *S* Beautiful, tender... excellent! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wonderful ending to this. It brings in all kinds of warm feelings. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This touches a spot very deep within... well done, Sir. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
some would say, how very small is his world, that so little would mean so much, and yet, they don't have a clue, do they my friend...not a clue...and I pray, they someday do, b/c there ain't nothin like it....love to you and yours...what a lovely write.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....The light shines in these words.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
mrs. rat is one very lucky mouse !!! this is just soooooooo romantic...h |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"there within your spirit song I heard my own" Great correlation -- "birds of a feather." Try this one, it's kind of weird -- curious about your thoughts. /pip/Forum83/HTML/001323.html |
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