»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #28
»
Breath Unplugged
| Open Poetry #28 |
|
Breath Unplugged |
|
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
|
Breath Unplugged When a spirit is set free across the chasm there is a breeze that nibbles ripples into the lake even when breath is unplugged it holds a minute to navigate the loss and plant a pulse so quick that robins in cocking head turn in sweet bewilderment Listen to the dreams that come when you are open to dimension and time spreads itself and you will know that love has no boundaries and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow ----- a repost and important...forgiving! |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Forgiveness has a freeing for both. It brings that chasm to a nearness, rather than spanning such a divide between. No one likes distance if they care. Thanks for sharing this. It was beautiful, and full of  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow ================== as always your words are stunning... thank you for this timely repost sweets... some seem to want the controversary and to be right more than they want the peace and forgiveness they are demanding from others. Everyone loses when being right is more important than compromise.  |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yeah, what Jan said!  Thank you for this Martie. You are such a gentle and wise soul. |
||
|
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I always click your nic when I see it in the forums. This poem proves again why I don't need to note the titles.. I am always delighted By whatever you write, and this poem is no exception..:-) excellent work...ice |
||
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Aye, lass....that is so true. I see this is the third time you've posted this one -- and I'm glad you did, because otherwise I might have missed it...though it must mean there's much forgiving to be done in this world.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes...important, indeed. Agreeing with Janet Marie as well. Thank you for posting this, Martie.  "My friends are my estate." |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
In order to heal we must first forgive... Wonderful words you have penned here my friend. ~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
||
|
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Listen to the dreams that come when you are open to dimension..." Perfect. |
||
garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What everyone said before me, Martie. You are so sweet and have such a good heart. Thank you, Lady. Hugs to everybody Ethel |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, I am an utmost believer in forgiveness now, ever since I turned to God, because though I was hurt deeply by the words and punches boys threw at me in elementary school and the losses of the few friends I've had, I forgive the boys because they taught me how to be a better and more compassionate person and understand and feel for the pain of others, and I forgive the Lord because I believe He has a plan and He now holds my friends with dear heart in heaven and they'll forever be free of hurt and they'll also be guiding me with their love! (wipes tears) I still cry very easily, but the big difference now is that I cry with hope and joy, tears I never had as a young boy! You are a true angel, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSisterOfMyHeart~ You are the rare breath of sincere sweetness~ 'When a spirit is set free across the chasm there is a breeze' Thank you sweet ... I am freely forgiven~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and you will know that love has no boundaries and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow How stunningly beautiful... and true. *S* |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - you have a way with your words and thoughts, as in this stunning write... BC |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our girl... |
||
|
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your words send a very important message and send it soooo well - great poem Martie - Paul |
||
|
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Good Sis, I just wish the powers that be read a little more poetry... Maybe they'd see the heart of all races. lucky dale |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
