Open Poetry #28 |
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reminiscence & dream (a pen about dreams, lost loved ones & my best friend RJ's dad) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho ![]() |
reminiscence and dream & reflections of things wayfaring voices concealed far away in perspectives further than I had ever expected yet surely somehow they had to be known to surface in dream too close to home life at best is a dull ‘ol chap but when it comes to the brambles the crunches and the too much aching and I've just got to stop the pouring rain and quit the breaking of love on wings flying away on gleam and the waking feeling that splinters journeys in the living of day and its fracturing of ice and melting of snow under the dream of stress and the weariness with its helpless pain that won’t play you slow and I know it's the wrong time but I'm in a mood and I'll keep it low along with the moon and my profile till the daylight comes & ends night long but please send me a rainbow in the drifting dawn like when daddy’s boat was once in the fog and no one knew not a hand thereon how daddy was blind but could tell by the smell and the shift of the wind and the cool of the air just where we had been as if he had sure all along seen Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale Have I read this before? I remember so well the last part...the visuals of a man who sees with his ears and with his sure knowledge of where he is. It is so poignant! |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing work. I love the way you write, the stanza.. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nope sis, just one of many... and thank you. And thank you too Kaoru glad you enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ I would smile a tender smile at the love I read in this piece~ Easy to see why he would have been your best friend~ What a lovely voyage on memories afloat~ Always ... always ... I admire your talent~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ Tee-Hee ... that title could be shortened~ ![]() But I wasn't even 'almost' tempted to skip it~ ![]() ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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