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Beneath a Single Sky |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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soon they will be annihilated and stuffed into a a final resting place, snuffed out of farmers flowerbeds, they'll deck the jars in crimson and violets, crushed and marinated, they are butchered, like the cows heads or the goat's tails, dancing under moonlight, shivering beneath the sunshine, there is life all around me, strawberry, inkedgirl, stone and ant, under one sky, in a blink of time.............. ****** have i truly lost it? ************ [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-13-2003 06:41 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
until you mentioned the animals I was thinking along the lines of grapes and jellies... whose time has come (although they are the fruit of the vine) not the flowerbeds... Must check this afternoon, my jars emptied quickly this year.  M |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
they danced under the moonsglow and shivered beneath the sunshine ........ what a capture...  nice write Michele... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
nice imaginary....like it! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nah, you could never lose it. Jason |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
someone needs to lament for the srawberries, and i guess they too choose me....... naked.......took some poetic licence, flowerbeds, tho, yes, contain the herbs that go into the jars with the crimsons and violets......yes? yes...... thanks everyone |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - no, you haven't truly lost it, just blossoming into one fine poet... BC |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Lament for the strawberries.. Welcome to my world.. but I'm sure you were here first..as Raph likes to point out. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was an interesting piece there inked one... Was thinking along the lines of a more global perspective...enjoyed the write. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you bill, that is one fine compliment kauro......so you too are a crusader for the silent? glad you could relate...yep, good old raf, yep diamond, glad you could see more into this i sort of left the path open, i guess, and thanks for stopping by |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
No you havent lost it, in fact you are seeing quite well beneath the surface here . . . xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Dear Goddess of All Things Inked! You have truly "lost it"--and I love it! lol   EA |
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