Open Poetry #27 |
Sitting on the Box [blame littlewing - HA!] |
Sunshine
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Sitting on the Box [blame littlewing] so she grew too big and the box would not hold all of the feelings as pain grew too bold and like a cancer it drew the blood from her mind so she sat on the box with her generous behind… ~*~ then the laughter faded to blue as the corners pricked an eight sharp view for holding to edges while fingers grew chilled as winds on the outside began destroying her will ~*~ she would clamber, if there were a door, back to the inside to be boxed once more, and away from the prying of eyes and despise where blankets of thought were quilted with whys ~*~ but like Pandora she flew in life’s face and opened the box to let out disgrace but it grew before her a hideous sight then the box closed shut subjecting pain to light ~*~ to be on the outside toprayforthenight when gloom would descend tohideherfromsight but light seemed to trick all that she’d see as she sits on the box ~ her name? Misery. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-27-2003 08:00 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good morning love, it must be something in the air, I swear. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
blame it on littlewing? denial is the first stage of healing my prayers for you in such a dark write - lol you got misery I got hate still a work in progress I guess we are just usually too darn happy - lol awesome write - & the challenge conquered |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful response to the challenge! I love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this, Karilea..... (Ethel going off to find another word of unhappiness) |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
So thought provoking. Did she bring it all on herself or is she just a victim. Foorgive me if I have got the message wrong. Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea!!! you are the Master I bow to you Oh, what a concept . . nice twist yes yes once out of that box sometimes hard to get back in Misery made beautiful *smiling* xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As you SIT on the box I see you keep the mysery in check ... great creation, dear Karilea. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
You did good with this challange, girlfriend...real good!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Blame her? *S* If she inspired this write, she deserves applause... it's excellent. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
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wasn't there hope in pandora's box? (I'm mythology obsessed) misery..good one. I like this challenge |
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Sunshine
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quote: Ovid (Dryden's tr.) Wind...this poor lady hasn't learned to get off the box, and let it open one more time... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Karilea... The "coming out" of the box is not a debutant ball. I have traveled far from my box, and it is as uncomfortable as it gets. Oh, I have tried to climb right back in there, but I, too, have grown...another line from my friend's philosophies (this one is stolen and reworded by him and by me) "a mind expanded can never go back to whence it came." OK...you probably know the exact quote. I should know it, too, but it seems my memory these days is on vacation. Goodness, I hope it comes back! But I also know you will forgive me...remember, forgiveness and acceptance! (Smiling) It seems I have used his "forgiveness and acceptance" philosophy a little too much these days! LOL Jeepers...you are making me think this morning! Patricia |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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WOW WOW Karilea, what a fantabulous write absolutely smashing dear lady. oh and the rhyme divine. this is a Maree fate is not just |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write n thoughts expressed,, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Blame --- har! Take a bow, Littlewing......you fostered a good one here! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
misery yeah |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
I just want to know what you are putting in your coffee!!!!! This is inspirational, and got my old brain ticking away, (which it, fortunately, needed)! Great one...~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Karilea, AMAZING. one for the library. much love, gem xxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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