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....ObSeRvAtIoNs...Of...ThE...ObViOuS..... |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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.....ObSeRvAtIoNs..Of...ThE...ObViOuS..... Feelings nothing more or less could release the love I have for you..... Skin deep... The living breathing emotion that keeps my chest in a constant rhythmic beat To have a table of contents is nonsense.. Everything I live for and do is blatantly displayed.. Not kept in conscience Debating whether the weather will remain the same.. Pain and rain The forecast... overcast to overshadow the time of the past A fluted glass... a wide opening.. And a narrow stem that’s held hand in hand... skin to skin.... The touch of elegance.. Frosted to keep preserved what’s within I could describe all types of things that make us.... But like glass its takes only a small amount of pressure to break us With held from the loves spell.. To dwell on.... separation.. Hesitation... I can’t decide or compromise on the given stipulations ... Uneasy at times and manic for the most part... A living work of art torn apart... a description of 2 broken hearts... Withdrawn and confused.. My mind has vacated its cerebral settings.. Thought processes have been still born... Brainstorms now come in forms of clouds and thunderstorms.. Your tears pour out your eyes To my surprise the rains fall from the skies.. Ripples in stagnant puddles multiply beneath your feet.. Cause the emotions aren’t there to cheat... Visually seeing your dampened cheek I want to retreat.. But a river runs thru my path.. Flash flooded from your optical hydroponics You allowed me to speak in proper phonics... Staying still to listen..Common for inanimate objects... Absorbed the spoken contents and translated the sob filled commentary into logic Without saying a word u confirmed my thoughts.. Making them reality due to your expressions and reactions Ways to maintain satisfaction..... Wanting to put my feelings in motion... I’m verb-less.. nothing can assert me to take affirmative action I try to keep a grip on myself... the water beneath my feet resists traction In a final attempt to begin to explain to you in the least How my feelings for you never cease or decrease.. I give up… mid sentence...observations of the obvious show your displeasure No words could be spoken.. Removal of self….. the distance I put between us is more than I can measure In hopes that one day… your open arms will once again embrace me… keep me embedded in your memory .....Forgive me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad one...love your stuff, come around more |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
thanx for the feedback.. |
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