Open Poetry #27 |
You are..... - answer to Balladeer |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Just couldn't resist writing you an answer Deer /pip/Forum80/HTML/003456.html You’re just a sweet ‘ol’ balladeer with lovely tales to tell We know that you are competent enough to do it well Each time we get a chance to yell ‘take up your pen and write’ It is because we know my Deer your mind is filled with light Your words have all the strength they need to weave a magic spell You’re just a sweet ‘ol’ balladeer with lovely tales to tell Your fantasies seem real my man. They feel like some hot shower You are right, in inner minds, we can achieve full power And certainly you’re touching cords in all the things you write I’m sure you will dream lovely dreams when you turn out the light And when senility hits you Deer and it will still your bell You’ll be a senile Balladeer with different tales to tell You’re right that nothing lasts forever, even ‘ol’ sweet you But all the tales you’ve told my dear, they’ll stay, I’m sure they do And all the tender things you wrote have touched our minds and soul You often made us laugh and cry, you really reached your goal I think I might speak here for all that you did really well You are a great ‘ol’ Balladeer, with tender tales to tell Titia LOL and only just now I discovered it was a challenge Deer wrote to , but nevertheless I mean every word I said above Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (07-26-2003 05:52 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And when senility hits you Deer and it will still your bell You’ll be a senile Balladeer with different tales to tell love it..and Titia, it was a great response to his. ~smiling Maureen |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to agree with her.You are all that and more.an awesome answer.Keep going. angelblueyes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can't wait to see how those senile poems will turn out!! Thank you, dear Titia. People like you are the reason I write. If I have ever put a smile on your face or nice thought in your heart, it is all worthwhile....thank you for such a wonderful response and I appreciate you very much, my Dutchie |
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