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Thursday Turns |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thursday thoughts begin early Too early for the sunrise Too late for the moon I mark those passings, An X through a square, Posted public Wondering about that mark You left on me And if I O’d Who would win Turn to trekking Wheels turn the whine Of black roughed road Into the morning symphony To accompany the French roast brew I hope I don’t spill And that I wish was Cappuccino So I could add a richness To the morning I don’t feel. Bend your mind Becomes the mantra Of workaday willfulness Wrap it around abstract and simplified Rules to run a business by… And Thursday begs me To touch another human’s skin To be alive To hope Again But Friday waits With a wry smile For every fool And every week has it end Thursday simply set the stage For another one To begin to end |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellently done... I liked the "NOTS and CROSSES" in there just as much you are positive thinking of the future (Friday)... Thanks for this... regards sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wheels turn the whine Of black roughed road Into the morning symphony To accompany the French roast brew I hope I don’t spill And that I wish was Cappuccino So I could add a richness To the morning I don’t feel. ========================= maybe you should try raspberry tea... makes your motor purrrr  and my moth mind goes in the strangest places..but when I read the title and saw you had posted another day of the week poem...I thought of the underware that has each day embroidered on it.... ROFL... dont say it.. I know. All I can feel is this distance between you and me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah wonderful write here Ron. Yes..Thursday comes and we know we're headed for the home stretch, and maybe something exciting for Friday and Saturday. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And Friday invariably makes Thursday to have been a worthwhile venture...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thursday is just another day to get through until Friday..but if you don't have something wonderful planned, the weekend is just another two days strung together. I surely am enjoying these thought provoking daily poems.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat For some it works and for some it don't, isn't that the way. LOL enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bend your mind Becomes the mantra Of workaday willfulness Wrap it around abstract and simplified Rules to run a business by… And Thursday begs me To touch another human’s skin To be alive To hope Again But Friday waits With a wry smile For every fool And every week has it end Thursday simply set the stage For another one To begin to end ~*~ What can I say? You're the Cap'n, and set the stage... and Friday is only hours away...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Reminds me of how one never knows what the next second of our lives can bring...much enjoyed your poem. Thank you |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
'friday waits with a wry smile' i like that. Friday always seems to know something we dont. bring it on.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wheels turn the whine Of black roughed road Into the morning symphony To accompany the French roast brew I hope I don’t spill And that I wish was Cappuccino So I could add a richness To the morning I don’t feel. I love that Cappuccino. Don't you? A good poem, Capt. Ron..as are all of yours. Hugs  Ethel |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And Thursday begs me To touch another human’s skin To be alive To hope Again" loved this  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Reading through some of the other replies, I see that the piece I copied has a universal appeal, "And Thursday begs me To touch another human’s skin To be alive To hope Again" that touches me. Maybe not my skin, but my heart. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Friday is the midddle of the week for some of us working stiffs |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'm barely out of Tuesday... Thursday's my favorite day, thanks. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - stop on by, cappucino is on me... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: brilliant write, Ron |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ron, just love reading you, you kinda make everything better. thursday madness...ahh theres nothing like it. psssst- cheap drinks on a thursday in my town...i'm going to daaaance away my thursday blues! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And Thursday begs me To touch another human’s skin To be alive To hope Again But Friday waits With a wry smile For every fool And every week has it end Ah, Cap'n... I do love the thought paths your pen takes me onto. *S* Some weeks seem to never end... others fly by too quickly... those latter need more richness than cappucino, though. *G* Love this! *S* |
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