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I Must Be Flying By The Seat Of Someone Else's Pants
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I Must Be Flying By The Seat Of Someone Else's Pants |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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I feel the wings of the morning moving through my mind down a road paved by the sun. I hear the laughter of the children standing by me as they mock the things I've done. I see the shadow of an evil rising over me with lightning in its hand. I sense the power of the wind rushing past me as I stand against the fury of the land. I know the troubles of the minds all gone before me down pathways I've been on. I keep the memories of travelers I loved along the way though now they're gone. I dream a fantasy of happiness waiting just beyond me as the skies are turning gray. I feel the wings of the morning moving through my mind gone to bring another day. ©2003 by icebox |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Exellent work.. I love your writing  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "I feel the wings of the morning moving through my mind gone to bring another day." All important, but this the most! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Speechless..you know what i would say I'm sure.. you've already written what i have thought |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you are- fantastic. I regret that I have neglected your poems up to this point. But then again, I haven been here for like a month. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
To feel, hear, see, sense, know, keep, dream and back to feel makes a circle but how to stay grounded while going round can sometimes be difficult. Your writing, as usual, is "captivating". |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome piece, leaving me with my mouth hanging open |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I keep the memories of travelers I loved along the way though now they're gone. I dream a fantasy of happiness waiting just beyond me as the skies are turning gray Back to the top...you are amazing...never leave us! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now I should like to fly by the seat of those pants What a wonderful poem - I am enjoying your work very much indeed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so very much enjoyed! Love the way you write poet sir. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sometimes the pants don't fit the way we want as usual, I found much to think on |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I feel the wings of the morning moving through my mind gone to bring another day. Yep, we always have the hope of another day, don't we.....as long as there is breath, there's hope!!  Hugs  Ethel (Pssssstttt!!! I wasn't going to mention it, but that title is another whole poem in itself...it could be made serious or humourous.)  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh excellent! I love the images you plant in my mind. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I hear the laughter of the children standing by me as they mock the things I've done. I know how you feel. An excellent write. Thanks, Melton |
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