Open Poetry #26 |
Avenging Angel |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hark! Who goes there? Be ye man or beast in shadows dark? Bare thy face lest ye be known a coward! Show unto me thy serpentine eyes of glowing red that I might smite the evil coiled there. Dost thee not recognize the avenging angel of God with excaliber raised in the name of all that is Good? Begone, monsters of Darkness! God's White Light is mightier than thy demon seed! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Linda This was fabulous and so very much enjoyed. I really liked your style in this one. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this i enjoyied very much, good write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Trish Herrick New Member
since 2003-05-09
Posts 8 |
You gotta know how much I love this. Only you could write such. Sounds similar to my nightly prayer...grins... You would scare the daylights of any evil spirit come round you! I so enjoy your spirit, Miss Linda... this is great... Hugs, Trish/Pat, regards2you [This message has been edited by Trish Herrick (05-13-2003 06:31 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue ~ Almost scared myself with this write! The Lord knows where this one came from! Thanks for dropping by! Think happy! Be happy! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ This certainly isn't my usual style, but it was fun to write! Warm hugs, EA |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
awesome write I really enjoyed it an this part: Hark! Who goes there? Be ye man or beast in shadows dark? Bare thy face lest ye be known a coward! Show unto me thy serpentine eyes of glowing red Reminded me of an old girlfriend - lol looking forward to more from such a tallented writer . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat ~ I bet you were a little bit surprised with this post of mine! Not the usual fare that I dish out! --It must be the planetary alignments at this time! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
dreambuilder ~ Why, you honor me, Dear Builder of Dreams! Thank you! ~ If you dare to dream it, you can make it happen! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bravo! You go girl!! Nicely done Linda.. Smite the evil of all the land wield thy sword within thy hand. Rest not thy bone upon thy quest for evils lurks, requires no rest! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I got the power now. Thanks Earth Angel. Had that feeling of hopelessness tonight. You gave me the sword with which to fight the demon. I feel so empowered. Inspired genius you are Earth Angel. Your writing here is wonderfully charged and has called me to arms. So awesome! -Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus ~ Wow! Thank you, Barry!--for your generous comments and your rousing poem! Your pen is mightier than any sword! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia ~ To reach someone with my poetry in such a manner, really touched me. Thank you for sharing that with me! Onward and upward! Charge forth, Dear One! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You have looked into the Dragons cave and must admit you were very brave. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Was that Randy in the cave??? ...now where's my sword...I must have left it around here somewhere!... Sweet Dreams, EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
And the sword of your pen adds to His might...Wonderful... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oooohh you scare this Dark Angel that's for sure! I really enjoyed this, very powerful. Maree |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(blows angel trumpet) Yay! May the unwashed masses be purified with the clarion call we have come to enshroud you with! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is mighty and wonderful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
One would hope these words are true. No scholar here, so I'll take comfort in your words and trust you know more about the powers of good and evil than I. good stuff, Joe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Startime ~ That was a neat reply! Thanx! Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maree ~ You are safe from this avenging angel--unless you have serpentine eyes that glow red in the dark of night... Thanks for dropping by and for the nice comments! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ This reply to you is my 8,000th post! I find it hard to believe--and for it to be with you, my friend! How timely is that?!? The numbers will change as soon as I post another reply, but I'll remember it was with you! Love & Eternal Light & The Clarion Call! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Joe! Well, I am no expert either! I just do what my Father In Heaven guides me to do! lol Glad you enjoyed! P.S. What color are YOUR eyes??? Warm hugs, EA |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
My eyes are naturally green, I'm scary enough without the glowing red eyes, but with the magic of colored contacts they can easily turn into whatever mood I’m feeling. =) Joe |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dost thee not recognize the avenging angel of God with excaliber raised in the name of all that is Good? Begone, monsters of Darkness! God's White Light is mightier than thy demon seed! Linda, very powerful writing that is very true. Hugs, Ethel Congratulations on 8,000 post!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joe ~ Green eyes are so beautiful! Why would you ever want to cover them up with colored contact lenses? Warm hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ Thank you! It felt good using some of my "power" in this poem! lol May your day be full of magic!--the white kind! Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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