Slipping Forth (Challenge Response)

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Open Poetry #24

Slipping Forth (Challenge Response)

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2003-01-27 06:28 PM

She sleeps in onerous
repose, sifting through unpropitious
memories of lovers who
never nest but only
fly. She's replete in
silent ruptures, she's withering
with empty promises, no
repose from her lover's
plight. She's slipping forth.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-01-27 06:29 PM

Strong little write! ThisDiamond

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-01-27 07:31 PM

and which challenge is this..oh masked one *s
M

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-01-27 07:35 PM

ahhh it was Connel's hard one... *s good work..I enjoyed the poem

M

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-27 07:37 PM

Philip!
Stay awhile...accept a few more challenges
and delight us!

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