Open Poetry #23 |
Whiskered Kisses |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
~*Whiskered Kisses*~ They say our love will never last But my commitment's unsurpassed Opposites attract it's true And there's no doubt I'm drawn to you It matters not what people say I'll stay beside you come what may You're my catnip...I'm your cheese You make my heart skip...what a tease Our love is here in black and white I care not if it's wrong or right They'll see that we're the perfect match I'll prove to them you're quite a catch What's that you say...you think I might In taste of you find sheer delight An offer such as this, my dear I can't resist, but have no fear Though whiskered kisses soft and sweet Are tempting me I shall not eat One such as you my rodent fair Trust me please, I wouldn't dare Come closer let me taste your lips And wrap my paws around your hips That's it...come on...move closer still I just can't wait to get my fill... Burp! ~vlraynes PdV asked for a little humorous poetry, and since my muse has been on an extended vacation, I thought I'd repost this one for her. Hope it gives you a laugh, Sharon. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-10-2002 02:34 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, one cute poem deserves another. Methinks I'll have to go dig out my "up" poem.... Smiling here... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
OMG! Just how cute is that? Into my library it goes for sure, and how did I ever miss that one before. I am so glad you "brought it up" |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of my favorite pieces, Vicky! Thanks for the repost! Baaaad puddy-tat! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops...pulled out Daddy's Naked Ladies... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeySweetLilBuddy~ How could you possibly have 'known' that I was just thinking of this adorable one last night ? Was playing with TrickyVicky who was hitch-hiking a ride on little Dallas across the yard yesterday .. you would have had great folly with that ! Soooooo ... seems we are just 'connected' again~ Not new to you and me, huh ? Your humor just gets me in my *giggle* spot every time~ LOVE YOU~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loved it! Saved it! HA! HA! HA! Very clever and rib-tickling! ~ happy hugs Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo cute, silly kitty! (giggles) I love kittys so much and this one brought a huge smile to my face, guess the ying overshadowed the yang, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank youn for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vicky darling girl That had me laughing so much I love it utterly utterly utterly. I remember this and always thought it was a real smile bringer, I thank you for it a smile is always welcomed Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
...*S*... J |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for the giggle. LOL The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is hysterically funny. I did not get a chance to see it before and I am so glad you brought it up. Truly had me laughing out loud. Thanks for a good laugh, quite talented, you are. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LOL right on!! Into the library, my genius friend! Go Vicky! Go Vicky! *ahem* *grins* sheshe LMAO I'm so cute! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
AAAwww soooo cute. I loved it! "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i enjoyed muchly vicky. quite nice. i love that picture. i really do. i'd say more, but i don't know what's gotten into me today. :: shrugs :: /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... [This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-10-2002 08:32 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This is such a delightful poem!!!! The humor is just right and very soul-pleasing as well. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, I wasn't here before to see this, so I'm especially glad that you reposted it. It is SOOOO cute. Thanks so much for sharing it with us....and the picture, too. I loved it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Meow...lol *licks her paws* hehehe I needed a laugh!!! *giggles* Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Vicki, my muse is struggling to come out of hiding, too. I like this, glad you reposted. Made me smile. Sandra |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This verse left me smiling...thank you!! ...believe what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Any rat that would trust a cat will be lunchmeat...James |
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