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vlraynes
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0 posted 2002-11-10 02:32 PM



~*Whiskered Kisses*~

They say our love will never last
But my commitment's unsurpassed
Opposites attract it's true
And there's no doubt I'm drawn to you

It matters not what people say
I'll stay beside you come what may
You're my catnip...I'm your cheese
You make my heart skip...what a tease

Our love is here in black and white
I care not if it's wrong or right
They'll see that we're the perfect match
I'll prove to them you're quite a catch

What's that you say...you think I might
In taste of you find sheer delight
An offer such as this, my dear
I can't resist, but have no fear

Though whiskered kisses soft and sweet
Are tempting me I shall not eat
One such as you my rodent fair
Trust me please, I wouldn't dare

Come closer let me taste your lips
And wrap my paws around your hips
That's it...come on...move closer still
I just can't wait to get my fill...

Burp!

~vlraynes


PdV asked for a little humorous poetry, and since
my muse has been on an extended vacation,
I thought I'd repost this one for her.
Hope it gives you a laugh, Sharon.


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-10-2002 02:34 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-10 02:40 PM



Yes, one cute poem deserves another.  Methinks I'll have to go dig out my "up" poem....

Smiling here...  

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2 posted 2002-11-10 02:41 PM


OMG! Just how cute is that?  Into my library it goes for sure, and how did I ever miss that one before.  I am so glad you "brought it up"

                
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and let it begin with me.

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3 posted 2002-11-10 02:48 PM


One of my favorite pieces, Vicky! Thanks for the repost!

Baaaad puddy-tat!

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4 posted 2002-11-10 02:52 PM



Oops...pulled out Daddy's Naked Ladies...

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5 posted 2002-11-10 02:54 PM


HeySweetLilBuddy~
How could you possibly have 'known' that I was just thinking of this adorable one last night ?

Was playing with TrickyVicky who was hitch-hiking a ride on little Dallas across the yard yesterday .. you would have had great folly with that !

Soooooo ... seems we are just 'connected' again~
Not new to you and me, huh ?

Your humor just gets me in my *giggle* spot every time~
LOVE YOU~
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2002-11-10 02:59 PM


Loved it! Saved it! HA! HA! HA! Very clever and rib-tickling!

~ happy hugs

Linda

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7 posted 2002-11-10 03:09 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo cute, silly kitty! (giggles) I love kittys so much and this one brought a huge smile to my face, guess the ying overshadowed the yang, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank youn for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-11-10 03:25 PM


Vicky darling girl That had me laughing so much I love it utterly utterly utterly. I remember this and always thought it was a real smile bringer, I thank you for it a smile is always welcomed


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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9 posted 2002-11-10 03:42 PM


...*S*... J

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10 posted 2002-11-10 05:40 PM


I really enjoyed this.  Thanks for the giggle. LOL  

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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11 posted 2002-11-10 06:11 PM



This is hysterically funny. I did not get a chance to see it before and I am so glad you brought it up.

Truly had me laughing out loud.

Thanks for a good laugh, quite talented, you are.

Warm Regards,
Pat

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12 posted 2002-11-10 07:01 PM


LOL right on!! Into the library, my genius friend! Go Vicky! Go Vicky! *ahem* *grins*
sheshe LMAO

I'm so cute!

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13 posted 2002-11-10 07:59 PM


AAAwww soooo cute. I loved it!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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14 posted 2002-11-10 08:31 PM


i enjoyed muchly vicky.  quite nice.  

i love that picture.  i really do.

i'd say more, but i don't know what's gotten into me today.

:: shrugs ::

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-10-2002 08:32 PM).]

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15 posted 2002-11-10 09:28 PM


This is such a delightful poem!!!! The humor is just right and very soul-pleasing as well. ***Ivy Rose
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16 posted 2002-11-10 09:35 PM


Vicky, I wasn't here before to see this, so I'm especially glad that you reposted it. It is SOOOO cute. Thanks so much for sharing it with us....and the picture, too. I loved it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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17 posted 2002-11-11 11:22 AM


Meow...lol *licks her paws* hehehe I needed a laugh!!! *giggles*

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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18 posted 2002-11-11 03:06 PM


Vicki, my muse is struggling to come out of hiding, too. I like this, glad you reposted. Made me smile.
Sandra

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19 posted 2002-11-11 03:08 PM


This verse left me smiling...thank you!!

...believe what your heart feels...

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20 posted 2002-11-11 09:01 PM


Any rat that would trust a cat will be lunchmeat...James
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