Open Poetry #23 |
Radiance..........Duet with Magnus |
CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Radiance by Magnus and CSKpoet Oh whispering dove do the wings soar into flight upon winter’s breeze where butterfly wings once flew on tender love’s flowing breath Fogging themirror’s reflect in lover’s exhale as nighttime carries the moon Gossamer caress in romantic rendezvous rose brushed complexion of two in passions embrace shooting stars across the skies Sparkling moonlit ambiance casting glowing gaze sighs within heavenly eyes Shimmers in the night of sky so dark, indigo stars fill night time eyes as wings take to soar on air of cotton skies and moonbeams. Coo of the dove mourning soft brings to ear the cry as eyes shine the morn anew. Colorful sunrise couple wrapped in warm embrace by the light of day etching another chapter upon the heart of lovers promises of tomorrow where love never ends a radiant shan-gri-la Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, I just love how this poe cooed like a dove across these pages, sweet friends, I could truly feel Shang-ri-La reading this, this is precious, I love it, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Cheryl and Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful. You both did a superb job. It's soft and tender and just lovely. Bravo! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Cheryl and Barry, you know where I'm putting this beautiful love poem...right into my library. This is so pretty. thanks so much for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl and Barry, Well done, I enjoyed the read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
:bravo: superb duet.....love it! Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cher & Barry! A beautiful romantic duet! Very very nicely done. ~Hugs to you both!~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
A sincere thank you for taking time to comment on this. I am honored to write with Barry. I consider his artful words as wonderfully expressive and genuinely emotive. Big hugs to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cher...sorry that I just replied...Have been out of town for a few days... Thanx much for the poetry lesson...Enjoyed the write...was fun.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was great! together or apart, everything you write is wondefull! "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
very cool. i find any collaboration that works this well remamarkable becuase of how different even the most similar people are. -majnu |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A fine blend of talents...well done.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would like to visit this place where love never ends...James |
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