Open Poetry #23 |
Just Make Believe.........(Connel Challenge) |
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
In deepest slumber A midnight kiss No dream has ever felt like this Much too real…. It’s fantasy passion Just make believe Amazing what one can conceive ….new morning blush waking her day with wistful hush ~SEA~ /pip/Forum7/HTML/000525.html The Hardest Challenge from Connel |
||
© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved | |||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, I think you met the challenge very well. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks Ethel, I like a good challenge and this one was fun |
||
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A challenge well met... A great write SEA. Enjoyed Maree |
||
Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I didnt see any repeaded or not allowed words in your poem, Challenge well met. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, yay, you did it, i think I'm going to give this challenge a try too! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is pretty. I especially enjoyed the morning blush. *hugs* The stars will shine when I am gone, |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |