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Undefeated - Wind's "Don't Waste A Word" Challenge
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Undefeated - Wind's "Don't Waste A Word" Challenge |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Undefeated*~ Write a poem that does not repeat She says," too tough", but mine will defeat So sitting here with ink-filled pen Muse on ready, composing begins Word and rhyme to parchment go Where they end, no one can know Inspiration runs this show Me, mere rider of its flow Challenge very soon complete Told you I would ne'er be beat! ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perfect Vicky!! Challenge met and conquered! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the muse is mightier than the challenge!!  Hey you!! Welcome back girlie!!  Well done poetess Vicky No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very very cute Vicky now I will have to go find this here challenge |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Yay!!! Yes, you did conquer it and with a wonderful grace! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tricky Vicky in rare form made a rhyme from challenge born Said that she could do it quicker By golly isn't her quill slicker~ Up to plate - poet did step Batted without rhyme of regret No one does this much better Penned right down along the letter~ Give Ms. Poetess an A Deserving chick ... Hip - Slip Hooray !  *Huglets* ~*MeAdmireYou*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Yeah Vicky!!!  *can't stop grinning*I'm so cute! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Very nicely done, Vicky. You did this quite well. Parasite |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so cute Vicky! Nicely done and a challenge well met. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ok, you did it, I admit defet by four people now... And they were all really good poems. Good job, this challenge was well met, and I don't see any repeated words. And you msde it ryhme. Once again, good job "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brava! Your muse outdid herself! This is wonderful, and were I to take the challenge, I would not show it, as yours should stand at the top! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Gosh no repeating words to see Would be very difficult for me Because I don't have many synonyms Only few simple ones it seems  good to see you again, TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good golly, Miss Molly! That was really well done! EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A challenge well met. I enjoyed your nonrepeating rhyme.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, you certainly did do it, didn't you? and with very flowing and graceful words. Very, very good. I enjoyed very much. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gentle Spirit...thank you. Glad you enjoyed. JM...thanks for always being there with a kind and encouraging word. I appreciate you, my friend. SEA...thanks much, and yes...give it a try. Noah...thanks so much for the kind reply. You always make me smile. Marge...thanks much, buddy. I am SO GLAD that my muse is finally peeking her head out of hiding. Now I just have to bribe her to come all the way out. Love you, my friend. Rhonda...you're so good to me. You always make me smile. LP...thanks much, my friend. Very glad you enjoyed this. Nancy...thank you. Glad you enjoyed this. Wind...thank YOU for posting such a great challenge. Thanks to you, my muse decided to come out and play a bit. Karilea...thank you, friend. Your comments mean much to me. Titia...good to be seen. Thank you, my friend. EA...thanks so much for the enthusiastic reply. Really glad you like this. WhiteRose...glad you enjoyed. It was fun to do. garysgirl...thank you for the kind words, my friend. I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thanks again to all of you...you're the best! Hugs and much love, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Challenge well met.. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool beans! good job missy hugs, g (i get that 'missy' thing from joie...all 4 yrs of her going on 24..lol!) "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown |
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