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Whip stitch (a Serenity sorta challenge)
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Whip stitch (a Serenity sorta challenge) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I whip stitch sclera of the sky. It's raining gathered glass again. Suspended wine-scent, pressing rose. A fragrant oil ghost, the road. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mike, you have wonderful way with words! Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Linda. I wanted to whip-stitch two like verses together, to create something new. I'm glad you enjoyed.  Mike [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-03-2002 07:33 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very clever Mikey!! Enjoyed much! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Nancy.Mike |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the scented oil of the road. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like it...when are we gonna do an Open Mic night Mikey!!!!????? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great stitching here, Mr.Squirrel...  ~ hugs from a rodent of a different stripeLyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike You caught me with my dictionary...with your fresh originality. Good stuff! |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Nice stiching here. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Kethry, Thank you... Sharon, I'm ready when you are. Lyra, thank you for enjoying the threads.  Martie, the only reason I know the word sclera is because I've had my eyes operated on before ... and, actually, an ex-girlfriend taught the word to me, too, when I forgot it the first time. Tammy, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed. Mike |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
"witch sip?" oh no witch stip(ulation) (ululation)  dude, you have been using "oil" in poems lately and each time it srikes me that word is pregnant I doan no nuthin bout birthin babies Miz scarlett! ah jeez needing to go to bed==== brian |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmmm...."witch sip" seems to have proved a more difficult challenge...at least for the night...  truly tho, you and Kari, get the idea of the challenge...in joining of two thoughts to create a whole... Thank you Mikie. I go out there in the world and come home home feeling like an alien--until I come HERE. chuckle...and yes, I mean that as compliment. yer gorgeous, and this is a sand painting. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Some good metaphores here, Good work |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
brian, I can answer that one. When it first rains in Southern California, all the imbedded dirt and oil of the freeways rises up to the surface, making the roads treacherously slippery (that's in an old, old poem of mine, called rain stones, which includes the line "Glass and lost purchase"). I want rain!!! Serenity, witch sip, hm? Now THERE'S a challenge! I'm gonna try it! (and i know what you mean)Zall, thanks! Mike |
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