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Open Poetry #22

To Once (Revised)

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-09-03 10:55 AM

Masquerading in
Daily torture
With a smile
Knowing not a cure
An antidote fathomable
For this discontent
Oh, but to breath
Your breath
To feel your hands caress
To drown in
Pools of eyes linger
To have known
Once
I felt everything pure
For which I long
And its acceptance
Then contentment
Would be found
In this
Life’s death

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-09-03 11:20 AM

A beautiful legacy to love and to savor. There are never really any endings without a new beginning in conclusion. Well done.
ThisDiamond

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-09-03 11:58 AM

Thank You.... very much

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-09-03 04:53 PM

The power of the words written, showering
us with the desire and yearn to be held,
to embrace and feel the warmth of another..

And to remain until.....

Beautifully done....

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-03 05:26 PM

Connie,
Ooo, you lengthened it!
Now, instead of just the exhale,
we have the intake,
too.

Mike

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-09-04 12:36 PM

Thank You... : )

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