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In Light Of Day
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In Light Of Day |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Light Of Day ~*Diana Tindal*~ In light of day on yawn of dawn Frolic of words across moist lawn Saying will you ink this thrill in thrust of colors from your quill Dab of crimson Dip of gray All words now in fond array Canvas glow of rising sun lit with words on blazing run Caught by artist in word-display without that 'thing' I could not say~ *My contribution to you-know-who's thingy* /pip/Forum7/HTML/000479.html  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh and you did it such a delightful way. I enjoyed every E'less word. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-02-2002 02:46 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
D'lightful stuff no E's was 'nuff for writing such a brilliant gift giving all a thrilling lift.... wonderful Margie gal. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 02:54 PM).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Great Write Marge, I liked alot. Regards, Olias. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
First class! write with grace, all others lose face; |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Oh this is beautiful! I didn't realize at first you were writing without any E's. That sounds difficult! You did well though. Very nicely done, Marge/Diana.  ~sky You look inside my wild mind |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a warm colourful poem! Neeraja |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
your contribution to my "thingy" is a song that sings in light. . . good work. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to all~ It was actually much fun Took just a bit of ink-of-think~ *HUGS* ~*AliasDianaISMy'Mid'*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yo Margie....another good write....and what thing you talkin' 'bout anyhow?...LOL...and thanks for posting my pic....I still don't know how to do it in my posts...but again, I'm in my 4th year of college taking Atari 101 still..... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
And, you did it oh so good. But, I had no doubt that you could. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, As always well done.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're too cool and too clever!!! Signed ric tru |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Marge!!! ~Big Hugs sweet poetess~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Wonderfully written from a masterful pen. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: How clever of you! This was a challenge well met! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister again I wanted to reply to this so here I am this is beautiful writing absolutely beautiful, you know I LOVE this one. You are an absolute star when it comes to writing. I love it, utterly adore it perfect poetry.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Friends~ You are all so special to this lady~ I have fun ... share it ... and you all wrap me in the warmth of your friendship of enjoyment~ What more could this poetess ask for ? Nothing .... absolutely nothing~  From my heart ... I love you all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Very Excellent. Oh Oh I used some "Thingy's" Enjoyed it Marge... Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Outstanding work, Diana. As always. *G* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice words, Marge... could really feel it... Regards, sudhir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What "thing?" I love it, you know I do  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful challenge to write without the "e's" and you've accomplished it beautifully Marge, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit (ps ... I used up about 12 of them just responding above, lol) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Diana/Marge... You not only succeeded in writing a poem without e's, but you have written an absolutely marvelous one at that...  ~ hugs and kudosLyra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You all know how to pass on a *grin* This was FUN ! Might do it again~  *Hugs* ~*Diana*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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