Open Poetry #21 |
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Et Tu Brutus? |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas ![]() |
The forked-tongue smile of slanted friends Shoot out in verse of blue Poisonous fingers webb my flesh As laughter peals the room A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-08-2002 02:27 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
there is a power in this enjoyed I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh yes, I agree with Temptress... Very powerful indeed. So much said in so few words..... The more I read it, the more I was pulled in.. Execllent ~Sheri |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Wow, this is powerfully poignant, sweet friend, you indeed have a knack at expressing pure emotion in your words, this is excellent, we all love you so much! BRAVO!!! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-08-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Much emotion here. Hugs Sandra |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Keep a close eye on you enemys and even a closer eye on your friends. paladin |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yeesh...looks like you're gonna have the damn *smile* princess work OVERTIME...and you know I hate overtime!!! *sigh*...and here I go... have met some of these myself!!! I just cram them in an aquarium and be done with it!!! G** ??? how bout that??? eh??? seriously Kris...you've hit close to my door here... Take care! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...FANTASTIC!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Perfect imagery, Kris... Its amazing how you can say so much with so few words.... ![]() Lyra |
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