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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-08 12:33 PM




The forked-tongue smile of slanted friends
Shoot out in verse of blue
Poisonous fingers webb my flesh
As laughter peals the room


A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-08-2002 02:27 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-08 12:34 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Temptress
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2 posted 2002-07-08 04:17 PM


there is a power in this
enjoyed

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Irie
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3 posted 2002-07-08 04:31 PM


Oh yes, I agree with Temptress...
Very powerful indeed.
So much said in so few words.....
The more I read it, the more I was pulled in..

Execllent

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-08 07:45 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is powerfully poignant, sweet friend, you indeed have a knack at expressing pure emotion in your words, this is excellent, we all love you so much! BRAVO!!!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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catalinamoon
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5 posted 2002-07-08 07:53 PM


Much emotion here.
Hugs
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-07-08 08:52 PM


Keep a close eye on you enemys and even a closer eye on your friends.

paladin

devina
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7 posted 2002-07-08 09:46 PM


Yeesh...looks like you're gonna have the damn *smile* princess work OVERTIME...and you know I hate overtime!!!

*sigh*...and here I go...

have met some of these myself!!! I just cram them in an aquarium and be done with it!!! G**  ???

how bout that??? eh???

seriously Kris...you've hit close to my door here...

Take care!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-07-08 09:56 PM


...FANTASTIC!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-07-09 12:01 PM


Perfect imagery, Kris...
Its amazing how you can say so much with so few words....
~ hugs and words

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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