Open Poetry #21 |
Et Tu Brutus? |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
The forked-tongue smile of slanted friends Shoot out in verse of blue Poisonous fingers webb my flesh As laughter peals the room A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-08-2002 02:27 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
there is a power in this enjoyed I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh yes, I agree with Temptress... Very powerful indeed. So much said in so few words..... The more I read it, the more I was pulled in.. Execllent ~Sheri |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is powerfully poignant, sweet friend, you indeed have a knack at expressing pure emotion in your words, this is excellent, we all love you so much! BRAVO!!! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-08-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Much emotion here. Hugs Sandra |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Keep a close eye on you enemys and even a closer eye on your friends. paladin |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yeesh...looks like you're gonna have the damn *smile* princess work OVERTIME...and you know I hate overtime!!! *sigh*...and here I go... have met some of these myself!!! I just cram them in an aquarium and be done with it!!! G** ??? how bout that??? eh??? seriously Kris...you've hit close to my door here... Take care! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...FANTASTIC!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Perfect imagery, Kris... Its amazing how you can say so much with so few words.... ~ hugs and words Lyra |
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