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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-08 07:19 PM

Stop the Dance Complete

Today I changed to lavender, vanilla placed aside.
I stretched to span the floating softness,
captivated with thoughts of you,
caressed by eyes in mind of hold,
silently surrendering behind closed doors.

A moment's drowning to cleanse,
breaking the surface of warmth,
I couldn't stop the dance complete,
feasting on yesterdays dreams,
feeling a depth of touch
candlelight illuminating the shadows
that mimicked my every move.

I chanced upon this feeling, letting truth
be my consequence and now...
I let go my rhymes, escape my dreams,
respecting your wishes, as I distance myself
to stop the dance complete.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-07-08 07:24 PM

Today I changed to lavender, vanilla placed aside.
I stretched to span the floating softness,

These lines just float across the page and into my mind...
How very lovely, Maureen.

~ hugs of softness

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-08 08:25 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Wow, I love the whimsical and silky flow of this sentiment, sweet friend, this is a beautiful colorful work of art, we all love you so much!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-08 08:45 PM

Are you sure you really want to 'stop the dance complete'?

Seems you'd want it to go on and on...enjoyed the poem, hope I'm not showing I missed the message all together.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-07-09 09:15 AM

Maureen darling heart in this delight you have excelled your usual high standard normally your writing shines, in this one poem you have written incandescence. I cannot praise you too highly. This is exquisite writing I love it utterly utterly. Truly beautiful

You will always have a dance within your soul darling heart

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-07-09 10:14 AM

enjoy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-07-09 11:47 AM

Lyra...I was taking a soothing bath in a new fragrance for me. Lavender, was given as a gift and I was told it is supposed to be relaxing.
thank you for your soft hugss
M (I hope your cough is better)

Noah...thank you for the read and response...it's always nice to cleanse ones soul occasionally

VAS...
"Are you sure you really want to 'stop the dance complete'?" I am never sure of anything anymore...but sometimes you have no choice, no matter what you really wish. And yes, you got the correct message. *s
thanks for your response.

hugs
M

Marsha...Thank you for your support always..I appreciate your friendship.
hugss
M

Thank you V *s
hugs
M

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