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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-21 09:35 AM

Show me your sky, without any adjectives. Notify me if you do one with the web address included.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2003-02-21 07:25 PM

Without adjectives? Wow this is going to be hard...I'm going to give it a try.

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2003-02-23 03:11 AM

I really like this idea. Wait til I get back to school, then I'll attempt a response.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-23 05:07 PM

Tough one.

I die
in the sky
of you,
the clouds cry
my heartsong
for losing you.

Howz that?
I miss my adjectives!

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

4 posted 2003-02-23 08:25 PM

Well, I didn't make it to school. Snowy roads and two hour drives don't get along with me.

But, I went ahead and wrote a try anyways.

Sky Days

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2003-02-24 01:59 PM

I paint and rearrange
The stars with a brush.
I set music from a corner,
And it enchoes to another edge
Of lovers' minds,
And bestows solace upon prilgrims-
Whose hearts are serving the Lord,
The creator of this scene.

hey did i did it right?

~Every girl has a dream within.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-24 03:52 PM

Most assuredly, aries, I can tell it's night and there are no adjectives.

It's a beautiful poem, too, with a peaceful feel to it.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-02-28 11:35 AM

I think that this is an interesting challenge. I just posted "I Rise At Night" in Open 25.
/pip/Forum64/HTML/000905.html

~ Have a wonderful day!

Warm hugs,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-28-2003 12:09 PM).]

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

8 posted 2003-03-01 10:11 PM

sky and no adjectives? I'm usually too lazy to try to work on a challenge, but tonight I will give it a shot... hang on while I start typing....

Home to angel's choir
haven for nature's horde
bird, bat, bug, and air
the net which snags wishes
entwines our prayers
and frees our dreams.
Ether, whisper, scent,
container of life, love, and joy.
Now too, the resting place,
of fourteen new angles.
ash and soul joined two decades apart.
Earth's sky, our supplier of life,
now our astronaut's burial plot.

Sorry if this became morbid, but as with all I write, it created a life of it's own.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

9 posted 2003-03-02 10:51 PM

*grins* i hate to point this out JP, but possessive nouns are considered adjectives. hehe

but, they look good where they're at. great stuff!

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

10 posted 2003-03-03 12:15 PM

Auuuggghhhh! Posessive nouns! That's the demon I was looking for!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

11 posted 2003-03-03 06:22 PM

Where is the sky?
You never see it,
But it is there

amen
(coughs)

ohhh I thought you said no verbs or adjitives (thats gramaticaly impossible, if you think about it)

the Wind is invisible.
remeber me

[This message has been edited by Wind (03-03-2003 06:23 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

12 posted 2003-03-03 06:27 PM

/pip/Forum64/HTML/001137.html

the Wind is invisible.
remeber me

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

13 posted 2004-09-11 12:07 PM

Haha... COuldn't think of what to write, so went through all the challenges again...

Here's my post for this challenge... A tough one, hope I passed.

/pip/Forum90/HTML/002432.html

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

14 posted 2004-09-21 03:17 PM

I’m flying
    FLYING
As everything meets and surrounds me
Rising up.. to capture me
And I kick my shoes off

My eyes.. my arms
   Smiling..
I’m flying
No hesitation..
    Just Explosions
No words
    Just Adoration

Just this knowing inside me
From this space outside
Where I’m flying

   And wondering

Where the fear went?

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