Open Poetry #19 |
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When Again |
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Masked Intruder![]() ![]()
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets ![]() |
When fire doesn’t blaze, but quickly kindles with scintillating passion. When a comet doesn’t fall, but deftly splits the night sky with lambent glow. When an ember doesn’t burn, but holds your delicate gaze with fiery ballet. Then I will burst as an enflamed spark, with fire in my eyes, and drop back into your life, like a falling star through the curtained sky. [This is part two of When. You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb [This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (04-03-2002 01:41 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) This is such a passionate and romantic sequel to your wonderful series, sweet friend, it feels as though there is going to be a Part 3, is there going to be? (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, pure love shines in your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Philip, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
there is a world of passion out there!well done ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MaskedIntruder~ Ahhhhh, this day just got a whole lot prettier~ TWO gorgeous writes ... very muchly enjoyed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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