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lunatic
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0 posted 2002-03-13 10:26 AM


have I said lately
how very special you are
you are wonderful
the thought of you lights my life
the daughter I wish I had
~*~
you know who you are
an indescribable friend
your lovely light shines
like moonrise on tranquil sea
shimmering across the miles


Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

© Copyright 2002 Man in the Moon - All Rights Reserved
Soleil Noir
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1 posted 2002-03-13 10:58 AM



This has a very
ephemeral feel
almost as if dipping
fingers into mist
to see the swirls
float...

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just out of reach
2 posted 2002-03-13 11:29 AM


soft and lovely.  Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2002-03-13 12:53 PM


Nice
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-03-13 01:29 PM


your lovely light shines
like moonrise on tranquil sea
shimmering across the miles
===============================

this ones true beauty lies in its sincerety
of intention.
A lovely poetic gifting.
So nice to see you posting again

You never knew what I loved in you,
I dont know what you loved in me ...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be.

Jackson Browne

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with you
5 posted 2002-03-13 01:56 PM


this is so sweet, feels like a hug and a smile enjoyed this very much!!
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6 posted 2002-03-13 02:04 PM



LunaTic~

Writing adorations in full adorn
Across beaming sky of early morn
Softly in flowing captured rhyme
Penning friendships through time
Falling on the very heart of one
Sharing the love till it is done
Inking rhyming verse so complete
Sweeping friend off her two feet

Beautiful turn of poetic inspire
Spiraling me into a rhyming fire
Warmed by thoughts from your pen
Sweet LunaTic please do it again

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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7 posted 2002-03-13 06:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful hug and heartwarming poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-04-03 08:57 AM



A lovely poem!

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