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Rest Awhile
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Rest Awhile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rest Awhile From whence and hence I rest awhile. In fields of green, of secret file And stare at different hues of blues To fantasize some phantom views I cannot move the jumbles pile Except with shovel of a wile And this I do quite frequently Without the aid of drink for me I close my eyes a moment’s bliss Within that time I steal a kiss Discard the dirge of agony And exercise my vanity. I touch the edge of fantasy With lovely wiles of ecstasy I am a moment’s butterfly Just winging through a golden sky. And this to me is what I need A tourniquet for human bleed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. My soundless Oh of admiration, my breathy sigh would tell anyone who saw me that I’ve just been to the soul filling station and been re Seymourised. This is another of your utter utter best darling boy. *This is excellent and as always I love it Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I close my eyes a moment's bliss Within that time I steal a kiss Discard the dirge of agony And exercise my vanity. I touch the edge of fantasy With lovely wiles of ecstasy I am a moment's butterfly Just winging through a golden sky. And this to me is what I need A tourniquet for human bleed ===================================== Close your eyes ... rest your mind ... in restful reprieve, leave your worries behind. Come sit by me ... we'll sip some tea ... sweet berried bree will set us free. A moment in time ... a moment of kind, promised in rhyme ... ours to find. Rest now in this fantasy's quest ... a tresure chest filled with a heart's every request. There is no dream the mind cant conceive ... all one needs is to just believe.   *ww*  Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I touch the edge of fantasy With lovely wiles of ecstasy I am a moment’s butterfly Just winging through a golden sky. Loved those lines~ When all else fails we better know how to wing it!  Enjoyed this a whole lot.[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-25-2002 04:25 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the way you dream here. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy If you can paint it, and write it then it must live in your heart with beautiful.  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, you never cease to amaze with the depth and beauty of your writing... this was just pure magic my friend... pure magic! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, I DO enjoy your 8/6 rhyme and the flow of your poetry...so easy to read and follow! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
a tourniquet for human bleed and words to wrap 'round the deed of struggle in life, rest assured your daily fillip heard your word |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sy I am not going to hilight.I cant!!! love it all, your words just roll off the tongue.floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To everyone that commented I thank you. I'm sorry I couldn't answer each one of you but I was pressed for time today and I'm not sure about tomorrow. Love you all Sy |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love the dreaminess your poems always offer, this made me dream reading it! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I cannot move the jumbles pile Except with shovel of a wile Ummmmmm.... Seymour??? Are you sure you didn't stop for a rest in my apartment? LOL I like this very much... well done! |
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Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
bump ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ron, A bump from you is a bump indeed. Thank you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Seymour, this is splendid PoetFriend... I very much enjoyed reading your poem this wednesday morn... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I touch the edge of fantasy With lovely wiles of ecstasy I am a moment’s butterfly Just winging through a golden sky. And this to me is what I need A tourniquet for human bleed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sy! Oh how I love this!! Beautiful indeed...thank you for this keeper! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What they all said  and a cup of rasberry tea for being so darn good!~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistent one *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Big thank you. Enchantress, And thank you for the beautiful comment. Sharon, And a big hug and for being so sweet. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!! enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What we all should spend more time doing to appreciate life. Thanks, Sey! Corinne |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
From whence and hence I rest awhile. In fields of green, of secret file And stare at different hues of blues To fantasize some phantom views Soooo beautiful Sy...almost missed it.. hugs ~Victoria
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