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What was I Thinking?
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What was I Thinking? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I looked at your picture today not quite deliberately it was just there but then I spent a moment quite deliberately looking at your picture and I felt no love, no gladness no satisfaction, no sense of justice no torment, no betrayal just puzzlement at what I’d once seen I only wondered what was I thinking? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ROFL oh Cowboy I can Sooooooooooo relate to this  you hit it dead on.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Precise and concise, enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It sounds as if all the emotional bondage that went with that person are finally gone.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Duncan - Been there, wondered that. Well done - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan...tis very to the point...and could go both ways...one could find someone that they didn't think made the grade....and then did... Hope your day becomes better for you... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks all...I feel better already!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Duncan, I think we can all relate to this feeling so much, people will always walk in and out of our lives, and sometimes we may discover that between yourself and another, there was nothing ever close or there was nothing in common, but there will always be those, even if only a few faces, of those that will always be our true friends for a lifetime! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You were not thinking. But now that you are in control, play your cards right. And good luck  [This message has been edited by walker (03-10-2002 04:06 PM).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Duncan, that feeling of release is wonderful. It seems to creep up on you, doesn't it? I enjoyed this, made me smile with my own remembers. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, forget it, buddy. That's the last time I send you my pic!!!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan, why do I love your writings so much???? Because they are so real, thats why. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very real writing, but why, in the world, would you write about Balladeer in such a non-caring way? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Poor Balladeer! You ought to be ashamed of yourself, Duncan LOL  Great poem anyway! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Funny how that happens huh? And isn’t it sad too? I wonder, is it because they change, we change, or they just aren’t who we think they were? You ponder well here Dunc. If you want to do any more pondering, let me send you some pic's of my ex...before I rip them up!! Lmao at Balladeer. I didn't realize his pic had such an impact on you Dunc!!!  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The twin twenties...in hind sight. Good work. ThisDiamond |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, LOL!!! Oh I like this one Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha, this is so very true. Good write. Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
SEA Actually, it was fun to write this, as I sat shaking my head at myself. I considered going with the 'temporarily possesed defense'! Thanks...Cowboy. Sy Ditto! Thanks. Kacy Well, at times I think she's still the person living beneath my stairs...then I tell myself it's only a bad dream. Thanks. Nightshade Hey, that could be a bumper sticker! Glad and sorry you could relate. Barry Thanks, my days don't stay bad for too long it seems. I'm coming to appreciate your poetry quite a bit. Noah You get it, as always...thanks! walker Exactly! Though, me in control...now there's a scary thought! Dee It was fun because it was such a feeling of release. I love it when I'm understood. Thanks. Michael Please, let me explain! I cherish, even worship your pic! I gaze at it for hours, daily. But where's the 8x10 autographed copy Tracey was supposed to bring me? Did she keep it herself? Hhhmmmm. vandana Thanks, I'm glad you stopped by. Floria A bit too real, sometimes. Thank you! Sunshine He's my poetic hero! It's all a big misundertanding! Thanks for the laugh and the time. Lyra Ok, now my tails really between my legs. I'm so sorry to have caused such pain. (btw...yer a nut and that's a compliment) Trace We were on a roll there for a bit, huh? Now reality has smacked us both upside the head. Is ok, the ghosts will clear eventually. I've been keeping the Balladeer thing from you but I'll work through it, I promise, just give me a little time, ok? This Diamond Thanks for the time and the response. How come I'm so much smarter looking back? Tara Glad to make ya laugh! Sandra Ha...indeed! Hope it made ya smile. |
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