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Open Poetry #19

Can't & Love

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-03-10 09:42 PM

Two words
whatever order
you place em
temperature
you bake em
put em in a
bottle and
shake em
maybe someday
you'll finally
take em
or leave em.........Mark Coburn

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-03-10 09:44 PM

LOL Mark. Good write. And thank you for the kind reply on my last poem.
Sandra

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

2 posted 2002-03-10 09:51 PM

your very much welcome and thanx for your response Sandra...how was the sea on this day?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-03-10 10:20 PM

Well said. LOL, can't love'm, can't leave'm, can't seem to write anything without'm.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2002-03-10 10:22 PM

Now I like this one!!! Right to the point, and with a bit of humor!! Great write!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-10 10:24 PM

This is good! This is very very good! Hugs.

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

6 posted 2002-03-11 01:37 AM

this is cool...I do like to get a bit of humour going within my work....definitely reading this tonight in balt. at funks coffee house....thanx my friends

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