Open Poetry #19 |
All My Heart Desires (Doctor Love's Challenge) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
All My Heart Desires By: Noah Eaton 2/28/02 Oh Doctor Love, I need your advice On a true love I can't afford to sacrifice My sweet RosePetal, my Gwenevere Who I want to spend my whole life with with cheer I am 18, going on to college This October I found the girl of my dreams I dream to kiss I believe you know her somehow, she posts her poems here Anyway, we love each other so close and dear But yet, deep down I feel sad You see, we live a couple thousand miles apart, hand from hand I live near the Rocky Mountains in Colorado She lives in the heart of Florida, in Pompano Yet she is all I've ever dreamed for, we have fallen in love And she says she wants me just as much as I want her, is that enough? I have tried to arrange to meet her by offering her a plane ticket Now I'm anxiously waiting to hear if her parents will let her visit I just want her to be the happiest girl she can be, just as she makes me happy Every night before I got to sleep I pray to God He will bring her to me For all I want to do is be faithful to her, and love her forever I know deep down I have to have her or I may feel heartbroken forever She says her dream is to go on a date with her to a Shakira concert I've been looking over her 2002 Tour schedule to see if I can have her dream answered While she's looking over her college schedule Hoping everything works out with time management and her parents, once I finish high school Oh Doctor Love, can you help me? Can you offer me advice until I may meet her soon? If you can even say just thing, I would feel so grateful What is your preference, do you know what I must do? [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-28-2002 09:20 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, I hope her parents let her come visit you! That would be so great! Maybe you should go there though so you can meet her parents....show them what a great guy you are...this is so sweet Noah, I hope Dr. Love can help you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love will conquer distance, I am sure of it. And any girls parents would love you. So I'm sure they will let her visit. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Maybe you can go to the same college..as long as you dont forget to study..i can feel the love and the pain in your heart..but college is the important thing..and if it is meant to be..you two will be together..or at least meet one day..and discuss your dreams..for the future...no rush in getting married you are still very young..you two are real sweet and intelligent and i want the best for you.. hugss ~Nurse Victoria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - I don't think you need a doctor, I think you need a travel agent.lol Seriously, I hope everything works out. Dave |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
All my prayer to God for you and her Noah, I hope this works out and that you can finally meet. I just read the Drs. advice and it is good. Love and all warm things to you dear Noah. floria Floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Makes me think of that old song...The Letter Give me a ticket for an airoplane ain't got time to take a fast train. Lonely days are gone I'm a going home. My baby just wrote me a letter. Well she wrote me a letter and said she couldn't live without me no more. Listen Mr. can't you tell her I got to get back to my baby once more. Anyway...don't care how much money I've got to spend...got to get back to my baby again... Lonely days are gone I'm a going home. My baby she wrote me a letter... The song went something like that... Hoping for good things to happen...James |
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