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Just Curious |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“JUST CURIOUS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I’m curious at times, if loneness is pain, or if pain is loneness… I’m curious also, if you’re aware my fragile heart knows loneness, and pain… Just curious, are you? ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) A tinge of sadness fills these words, sweet friend, I do think every once in a while we all feel this loneliness and pain, for I have known it for so so long and would give anything just to make it end and share my life with my dream love and to see you and all my friends in person! (sigh) Know you are loved by many, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bill Hi there this is a wonderful poem the fact you can write so much with so few words shows that you are a very good writer. This is very well written, well done   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Loneliness is pain and pain is loneliness. Both can crush a healthy heart. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
They are definitely twin sisters ~*~ loneliness and pain evil twin sisters of life defeated by love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I too am curious but know the answer...Being alone and lonely is very painful at least for me....I love to have someone, to share things with....I know this feeling well as it is the state I continually live in...a wonderful poem to make the mind ponder...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow this is awesome Bill. floria Floria |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello Bill. It is painful when we must ask to be seen by those that we love... Well done. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes BC...I am sure it does...after all of the years of life....how can one not know these feelings...at least once...Nice write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love the thoughts here. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I enjoyed this Bill. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loneliness, or loneness? Loneliness can indeed be painful. Sometimes being alone...in a state of loneness, can be pleasurable. Ask any busy parent after the kids are sound asleep.  I enjoyed the read, BC. You always make me ponder. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
That is a thought to ponder, and a very good question. Hope you find the answer together! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ah, but to not have experienced both, we could never experience true love my friend |
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