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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-08 03:01 PM

Lady fair, doth thee know mine heart beats long
I once gaze, in tears my will remains strong
Dost thee feel thy breast doth support me alone
Beg not thee yearn touch warm arms not mine own

Wilt thee be ‘pon the wall whenst knight returns
Bearing the torches as kindred fire burns
Thee must know tis two heart’s song doth mine sing
Doth thy ears hear thine own plucking of string.

‘Gainst the moon’s wane over yon mountain go
to wage the fight for life and all ye know
Most fierce of battles be fought and waged yon
in darkest of night till rise of red sun.

Thy castle high wilt keep thee well and warm
A thousand remain and wilt guard from harm
Your vision sure shall remain in eyes clear
Love thee eternally, lips say thee dear

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-08 03:10 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful piece of emotion and trust, sweet friend, may you forever endure all the battles in the fight for everyday and escape with your love into peace and harmony forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-03-08 03:13 PM

Glad you are not a saucy weather-bitten barnacle

ha..enjoyed Sir

~Vic

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-03-08 03:32 PM

Pure perfection!

~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~

Einstein

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-08 03:40 PM

I don't think I would attemp this Magnus, this is very difficult to do. I am so glad you are not calling your women wenches LOL..We have a restaurant here called Medieval Times and you go there and eat all your meals with your hands, no utensils, and you watch shows that are put on with knights and swords etc. I am going to take my grandchild there, all food is served by "wenches" I'm thinking you would love this. LOL.....nice poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-03-08 11:45 PM

How medievally romantic...quite impressive, Magnus!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-03-09 08:49 AM

Magnus darling boy this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. This series of yours have been stunning in their awesome use of language, and you do know I love it.

Did I hear someone ask for the wench? I’ll be there post haste……… Isn’t it time the wench set the forum alight again? Mmmmm I think so too

You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-03-09 08:52 AM

Keep thy drink of soul's warmth close
for thine eyes shall never gaze afar
as penned thoughts by quill of love
set down thy poems as many as stars...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-09 09:17 AM

Thy castle high wilt keep thee well and warm
A thousand remain and wilt guard from harm
Your vision sure shall remain in eyes clear
Love thee eternally, lips say thee dear
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is wonderful!
Can I be the wanton wicked wench?!
The one Floria and Marsha are talking about....
*sly grin, I could play that part well me thinks.*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-03-09 09:41 AM

Nancy...with thee be mine wench?  For seems
mine eyes see three.  Wilt thee find thy
wrench,  and twist this yearn from me?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-03-09 10:34 AM

Ok Mush...looks like I have a bevy of wenches
now for my poetry, between you, Nancy and
who knows else, time to write and wench the
page...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-03-09 10:35 AM

Gosh Vic. from swine to saucy weather...
bitten barnacle?? What will I be next...

Thank you Lady Victoria...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-03-09 10:37 AM

Thank you Duncan, I do enjoy writing this
genre of poetry... Lets my imagination go
into battle....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-03-09 10:39 AM

Floria, putting the armor on now....Gosh
it is heavy...How will I be able to eat
at this place....Someone pull my visor up
please... Thanx, that sounds like fun..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-03-09 10:40 AM

Thanx KJ...loved the lines...beautiful..
pleased you enjoyed this piece of knightly
history...

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