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Larry C
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0 posted 2004-09-28 11:54 PM



Everything but Weakness
By Larry Chadwick
Peace dear friend

Withheld for so long
your pain erupted
and bruised my heart.

Tears blended
both
by your agony
and
my failure to know.


Sometimes it’s pictures,
other times
a note.
Always –
unexpected.

Tears
not yet familiar
with the loss of you.


Tunes of recall,
grandpa in church,
us courting,
favorites you shared.

Tears of emotion,
also devotion,
even adoration.


The pleasure
of your accomplishments.

Tears inspired
by the milestones
of school,
of marriage,
of divorce
and employment
even
healing.


As a friend of mine once said,
“tears aren’t always about weakness”.
Friend…they seldom are.

September 28, 2004


If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (09-30-2004 10:06 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2004-09-30 11:17 AM


Larry

"Tears blended
both
by your agony
and
my failure to know."




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2 posted 2004-09-30 11:40 AM


Good morning hugs to you, Larry.
And warmest heart hugs to the Auguste family.

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3 posted 2004-09-30 09:33 PM


Boy do you have that right - tears to me are a sign of the strong.  Lovely offering Larry, your heart is showing.
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4 posted 2004-10-01 12:33 PM


Martie,
Thanks. It was personal and recent. Nice of you to notice.

Thank you Kacy and I pray for them peace and strength.

Sharon,
We certainly do agree. And thanks for the little love pat.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2004-12-07 08:23 AM


"Sometimes it’s pictures,
other times
a note.
Always –
unexpected.

Tears
not yet familiar
with the loss of you."

I really like these lines. But then I also really like the whole poem. It flows like a tear running down a cheek and getting caught in the dimple of a smile.
Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Larry C
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6 posted 2004-12-07 08:16 PM


Lizzie,
Dear lady you are amazingly insightful. Thank you for that and your tender heart.
&

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Fee
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7 posted 2006-01-27 07:07 AM


Tears are the hearts release.

I am such an emotional person and tears go with every emotion.

I enjoyed this so much.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Larry C
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8 posted 2006-01-27 08:58 PM


Fee,
How delightful that you brought this back. Thank you. Our friend Michael Auguste is no longer with us but continues to touch our lives. You are so kind.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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9 posted 2006-02-11 08:37 AM



I'm finding riches.


Larry C
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10 posted 2006-02-14 01:11 PM


Karilea,
Thanks and it is nice we can remember Michael in the process.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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11 posted 2006-09-30 09:43 AM


You are so right. I am glad I stopped to read. I opened this poem because my thoughts have turned to Michael in recent days, but the poem is so worthy....yes, glad I stopped.

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Larry C
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12 posted 2006-10-02 11:06 AM


Ed,
Thanks for the visit. His story, IMHO, is so sad. A family without their husband and father. And thank you cor remembering.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BabyT'Breezey
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13 posted 2006-12-16 01:52 PM


Your Poem touched my heart, i love the emotion.... i am glad i stopped in to read this wonderful poem
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