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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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He smiled before I left But I knew those sheets tonight will be crumpled as the sky. Crumpled in my loneliness, wrapping my body in his almost feel. I should have let him come, be mine body and soul this evening, only his words left me wanting. It was like that guitar he wrote about today, so musically inclined he is, yet he caught and held that one note from me, the one that vibrated with love. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
........wow. She said burn ... together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
OH! You're using more than one phrase to a poem.... be careful with the 'adultness'....  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
HEY!!! Where did you go!!!???? Get back here missy!! We've got to keep Mike in line... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is fantastic writing when I read this I could actually see the tears of lonely, and hear the I’ve lost you sigh. Absolutely perfect writing I love it love it love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, this is so powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, may that one remaining note be the epilogue of this masterpiece and fill your heart with vibrations of love to eternity! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
I could feel the vibrations of love that flowed from your pen onto the paper in this beautifully written piece. To thy own self be true |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am laughing to myself tonight~~ I don't even remember writing this one...guess it was a challenge of sorts from the response of PoetdeVine.  M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
June Marie, You do know how to find gems. M, I was almost slighted for not having seen this the first time. An excellent write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Larry, but it is a "funny" thing about my writings..after they are posted, I seem to forget I ever wrote them as if it comes from another person... I actually enjoy reading them...wondering where the thoughts came from  M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M,  Just for the record, I think it's our age. I do the same thing. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Is that what it is??? now you are making ME laugh!!! M |
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