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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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this is HARD!!! And i'm so behind!  The Fragrance that She Left ©2002 C.G. Ward you’ve been chasing me since my mind went and my will dissolved into little pools of the fragrance that she left. I learned though, in the hours I spent holding that bottle, that there is no replacement for a hole in your life. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow.... ah'm kinda speechless at the sheer thrown weight of that. Awesome. She said burn ... together. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh..............I feel like I should bow in supplication to your power as a poet. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
You've captured a soul consuming emptiness, Chris - a beautiful poem. APPLAUSE. WHAT a talent. -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, this is very nice |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Um, this was remarkable for being so short, bud. Should peek in this forum a little more often me thinks. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Christopher When I saw the title, I thought you must be writing about your new baby....  You do capture the feeling of a heavy heart so well in this. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is true. I like the return to the simple, direct poetry from you. Somehow it seems more genuine than your almost flamboyant endeavours of recent times; I can see more of you in this writing. Hm, I suppose I still think that imagery without over-imaging works best. Congratulations btw. Me |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not sure how I missed this the first time around, but I'd have to agree with Kamla, love the brevity C...  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know what? I only just realised that this isn't recent. This shows to me, thinking as I did that this was a 'return', that your recent writings have truly departed from your beginnings. Grumble - I'd have preferred this to have been a return dammit. Me again. |
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