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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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I've come down with a bad case of love, and its all because of you. You've sent my temperature rising high, its at least a hundred two. My head is delirious, my heart is so sick, Theres plenty of cause for alarm. You've affected me with you charm. I'm so weak and sore, I can't even sit up. It's a cruel thing to do to a Lover. I ache and I pain, and I really do think, I'll likely never recover. I'd go to the doctor, but I doubt he could help. I'm sure theres no cure for this. It's a rare disease and it must have been transmitted to me by your kiss. Since it had me down,its got me thinking, perhaps its a thing that could kill, But if it is, I'll tell you my secret, I hope that I'm terminally ill. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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I really like this.. it's catchy and cute when it comes to the form and rhyme, and it really brings up the thought of current (or latest) love in the reader. That brutal passion..like a sweet poison, eh? It hurts but you can't get enough. Oh, make me Thine forever |
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