Open Poetry #17 |
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night Of Magic (part 1) |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night of Magic The darkness of the night sky is lit with millions of brilliant stars filling the expanse of the sky as they cast a magic over the new fallen snow with a brightness reflected by the glow of the full moon As she leans back she hears the creak of leather seats in this beautiful red sleigh sent to take her to she knows not where except her girlfriend sent a message that she would meet her there for the party She closes her eyes and allows her senses to be filled with the magic of the ride as she breathes the crisp, night air mixed with the scent of pine as they pass through the woods and into a clearing taking them over the fields of unbroken whiteness The movement of the sleigh is steady rocking her gently as the horse moves forward at a smooth pace along the trail previously made by others as they too are out on this magical night with full moon and stars shining bright The snow crunches beneath the skis of the sleigh lending a gentle sound that further lulls her into a state of deep contentment as she snuggles into the warmth of the white fur that is wrapped so beautifully around her With eyes closed she sighs letting her thoughts drift to her dreams where a magical feeling of serenity flows through her transporting her to a past where the world still has time for the sweet joys of a winter sleigh ride Feeling the sleigh slow its pace and hearing a pounding sound she opens her eyes to see coming towards them a rider sitting tall on a large, dark horse which brings a smile to her face for this lends greater magic to her night ride Karen TorbiakĀ© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, Well if your dreaming you might as well dream good. Lovely enjoyed. *L* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You create such quality romantic dreams...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magic, snow, and a tall stranger on a horse... Can't get any better than that Karen! Very well done...love it! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Seymour...*grin* yes, and I so love to weave these kind of dreams. I hope you stay tuned..there is more of this story to come.**hugs** James...Thank you so much. I am so glad you like the way I weave romance...just can't help myself...I just love these kind of dreams. **hugs** Nancy...Stay tuned the magic has just begun...this poem/story will have a few surprises in it and of course plenty love and romance. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like you and Santa have something going on Love this. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen--Sounds like a beautiful beginning to a romance in snow. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Don't wake up this is a beautiful dream. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Snadra...*grin* well there certainly will be some magic on this snowy night. **hugs** I am so glad you like it. Martie...I just love romance and somehow the vision of a this kind of thing just fills me with awe. I am glad you are enjoying it. **hugs** Eloise...Don't you just love dreams that are filled with so much love and romance. **hugs** The next part is coming up. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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