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Half A Song
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Half A Song |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Half a Song How long then did you look for me, Did you search, or feel, our poetry? Which always seemed but a part, Or did Wind whisper to your heart? comfort me as yet you guide this team of horses that will ride upon the skies of ever when for you shall hear the wind again unrest has been upon this plain until the find of you again, and then the reasons behind these past decades have begun in light, to fade as well to slip between blades of grass those places where our feet have passed now cloak me once more with you and scatter my dreams in your view then allowing one to catch the tear as slowly comes the release of fear to hold the heart that's long held you through all trials, tribulations, too to face again the wind's caress to know that strangeness is welcome, blessed to feel, but not, the care once there to hear again your voice on air... for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow to make all that is yours be blessed of kiss for in my shadows, you still exist... In tribute to a muse... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a wonderful tribute to any muse Dear Lady. This is just incredible and so soft and loving of a write. Lovely!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* gentle and flowing with soft emotions to touch the heart. I felt this beautiful song for I know the sound of a muse who inspires me to write my best. This is magnificent. I love it.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How long then did you look for me, Did you search, or feel, our poetry? Which always seemed but a part, Or did Wind whisper to your heart? ====================================== unrest has been upon this plain until the find of you again, and then the reasons behind these past decades have begun in light, to fade ==================================== then allowing one to catch the tear as slowly comes the release of fear to hold the heart that's long held you through all trials, tribulations, too to face again the wind's caress to know that strangeness is welcome, blessed to feel, but not, the care once there to hear again your voice on air... for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow to make all that is yours be blessed of kiss for in my shadows, you still exist... =========================================== *shaking my head* ... oh Lady .... OH LADY .................... In the thought that sometimes less is more.. or sometimes words arent needed.... I shall say.......... IWISHIHADWROTETHIS!!!!!!!! (and you will just know the rest)  and you KNOW also...Im taking this one *S* (thats SOME MUSE my dear)  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Lady, if that is half the song, then the whole would play like the music from the stars...very well done...very gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
reading this beauty again before I go to bed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Lady, This is Splendiferous...... WOW-O-WOW-O-WOW Regards, Sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The glass of life is surely half full... This poem is grand... Can we look for a sequel?..  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SAY YES to Nans question.... we NEED the other "half of the song" think of it a poetic jukebox... and we are requesting your greatest hits |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In tendering to your requests perhaps now it would be best to say not a sequel that should be but a challenge for more poetry let all the poets for sequel's delight pen the other half to this song's write for on the winds, it shall be shown how far true hearts would truly roam... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Probably one of the most moving pieces of work I have ever read. A masterpiece! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow to make all that is yours be blessed of kiss for in my shadows, you still exist... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ INCREDIBLE!!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! Do I feel a series in this one, yes I do! This absolutely loves me, and you had my attention through the entire poem (hard for me to do by the way)...oh yes, this says, more! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Absolutely lovely~ Delicately scalloped edges of finest laced penning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
as well to slip between blades of grass those places where our feet have passed now cloak me once more with you and scatter my dreams in your view I'm so glad I didn't miss this. Awesome calling here..just simply magnificent! The stanza above caught me completely as I imagined the dreamer, lying in a grassy field with nothing to cloud them but the clouds and the sunlight. Bravo!!!! Every line...sublime. Sincerely, Regina |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--So glad I found this wonderful poem, so perfectly penned and filled with sweetest wind song. |
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