Open Poetry #16 |
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Ruminations of Love |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Yes, it is true, you still arrive with ribbons tying up my heart no matter what intentions are I just don't want to be apart. Tis said I have to love myself before the day you ever will but need for you is ever strong I swear, I'll never have my fill. It's naught that I am empty in and must have you to fill the void but when I hold you close to me my heart is full of boundless joy. I lay here with your feel inside but you have gone back to your home I miss you, wanting so much more my heart with you, no wish to roam. Oh fool that I could love so much a man who loves just part of me yet miracles may happen yet the two of us, are someday we. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you said it yourself Sandra. . . the best place to begin, is with yourself. . . love yourself. . . and love sees. . . I can feel the longing in this one . . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sandra, very gentle smile. To look down the road with belief is part of how we are, so continue to do so with a smile. Very nice write |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I wish you well, my friend. Nice work, as always. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sandra, I can feel your pain in every word here. *hugs* Dawn |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Maybe fate will be on your side Sandra..nicely done.. ~Victoria~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sandra, there is always a time when it is "our time" May this be YOUR time. Wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
when will we be one it plays on my mind each day one and one is we Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"The message here is quite clear, the heart of me needs you near not to replace any parts but turn one into the two of hearts." The answer you maybe looking for is blowing in the wind that softly caresses those ribbons in your hair. A beautiful and heartfilled message!!! One worthy of holding!! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Yes, it is true, you still arrive with ribbons tying up my heart no matter what intentions are I just don't want to be apart. Tis said I have to love myself before the day you ever will but need for you is ever strong I swear, I'll never have my fill. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Such a beautiful outpouring of the heart, Sandra... I hope he'd get the message all too clear... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely but sad song Sandra...well said. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is sad but soooooo beautiful and I know that this miracle will happen for you; for your beautiful heart is bound to melt the heart of your dreams! (sigh) You always deserve the most beautiful love of all, and I know you will find it! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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