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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-09-03 06:34 PM

A Wedding Song

I see…heavens’ blessed
in forms…of happiness
so I hold it up to you
for all you say and do

I feel calm…caressed
vacant of…all distress
so I hand it back to you
in all I say and do

I light…candle’s gleam
in shades…of golden dream
so take as gift from me
all that you hold and see

to join forces,…dear
to be…each other’s mirror
so slip these rings on we
behold our true beauty

Songs
come sing
happiness
shall ring
beauty comes
this day
in vows of
prayer say,

O

Come
to me
and live
life
fruitfully
for all we
have is hours
and times
are
heavenly

So,…I say, to thee
come live…eternity
be held by my side
where ripples,…wide…

this love of ours
shall span time’s hours
and enrapt are we
in love eternally…

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-03 06:43 PM

This poem is lovely....an open heart.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).]

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-09-03 07:33 PM

Lovely write, Kari. Very beautiful
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-03 10:37 PM

Karilea~
Very sincerely and beautifully written~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-09-04 08:10 PM

The paint spreads on the canvas very smoothly, bit by bit, it adds, moving to the final destiny of sight...nice write, Sis, very gentle smile

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-04 08:25 PM

This is all nice & warm & fuzzy. Nicely written

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

6 posted 2001-09-04 08:25 PM

Very sweet poem. Nice way to express feelings about a wedding.. I love the poem!!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

7 posted 2001-09-04 08:43 PM

Karilea--So beautiful..took me back to some times I've known.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-09-04 11:54 PM

Karilea, this is so lovely

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

9 posted 2001-09-05 12:17 PM

oh to see forever
on the glaze upon the sky!
oh to see eternity
and never question why!
oh to see forgotten dreams
in union of two souls!
oh to see so blatantly
two halves become a whole!
sunshine writes her heart upon
the pages of the blue!
oh to see the sunrise
on the ever of renew!!!

(applause to you ms karilea)

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2001-09-05 04:41 AM

Come
to me
and live
life
fruitfully
for all we
have is hours
and times
are
heavenly

as you wrote it...heavenly. I don't use that word lightly.

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