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Playing fishy - just some fun
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Playing fishy - just some fun |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 Don't be shy my sweety dear It wouldn't help to shed a tear I took you away from Mom and Dad And bought you this really fancy hat You promised me to be my wife So don't put up this silly strife Come on I've led you all the way To this pool where we will stay I'm all dressed up as you can see Polished my vinlets just for thee Got me a hat and glasses too Brushed my teeth only for you Let's play a bit in this blue pool And I will warm you if it's too cool So don't play rough my sweety dear Darn, I would kill for a glass of beer A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ I am laughing out loud at this delightful ditty~ Are you SURE you and Vicky aren't related ????  She's gonna get a big kick out of this one too The picture is marvelous inspiration ! You are sooooooooo creative~ Thank you for the big smile you've given me this evening~  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so cute. Tracey |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Titia...This is what I seen in the picture... I loved this and had to respond with my version... HE: Come to me, my little one. Don't swim away, we'll have some fun I know I promised, that I'd be good, and I would if I could. SHE: A mistake I've made. What should I do? You move too fast, and I don't know you. The glasses and hat, are just your disquise. You can't fool me, I'm too wise. HE: Come hon, don't be that way. I've made the bed where we will lay. SHE: Remove your fins, from off of me. A horny fish is all I see. AND: So she left him in disgust. She looked for love, and found only lust. If you can't make it so, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Fish drink beer? I'll say it, again...I love your world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Geez I hope that's not where I'm going fishing this weekend..God I'd hate to break up a newly formed family...especially in their honeymoon pool.......He ain't gettin none of my beer! I'm going to drink it when.... Fishy fishy in the brook come and bite my little hook. Then as fast as I can I will fry you in my frying pan" Oh the fish in this poem is so good...I mean really good umm umm! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Marge, well maybe we're soulsisters uhhh? Tracy, thanks dear Kitty, that's great, love it very much Duncan, why not? In my world everything is possible LOL Ethome, they've gone off for the weekend, so you have to worry dear, wish I could come along (sigh) Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very delightful and a surprising ending. I mean, I just plain wasn't expecting it. VAS |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe very cute! I love little fishies...I never go fishing anymore except to sit and keep my dad company. I much prefer feeding them! They'll eat right out of your hand if you're patient  Hugs and such, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia, dear, sorry I'm late That this is cute, there's no debate I'm laughing down here on the floor Just listen close and you'll hear me roar Those fishies swam right up to me And we had tea and cakes, we three Then they turned 'round and swam away I begged them but they couldn't stay To keep this longish story short Some small details I will abort To wrap it up just let me say There's something fishy about today! This is just toooooo funny, Titia! I love it! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-02-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
VAS, Yep, those fish uhhhh drinking beer nowadays, what the world is coming too  SmittenKitten, well they're waiting for you dear. Vicky, sweet girl that's a hell of a reply, WOW thee and cakes uhhh just the three of you uhhh, well glad you had some fun dear, they're yours, they're too fishy for me anyway Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia - Now that IS a fish story, you sure have me laughing out loud here. Great job on this one. *~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ |
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