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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2001-07-17 09:27 PM




Nimble fingers strike the first chord
Its timbre resonates within me
As my body reverberates in its sound
Succumbing to the purity of the melody
Which flows from the ebony and ivory keys
Played flawlessly tonight after hours of study

The pianist plays with such emotion
I am easily lost in between the harmony
Contrasting through the air before the stage
Nothing exists beyond the instrument’s euphony
Filling the concert hall with glorious music
Cascading from the ceiling flowing from the balcony

It reaches my ears in a waterfall of perfect pitches
Gathering together like the people of a colony
Or a swarm of bees buzzing about their hive
As they make the sweetest honey
They are so in tune with each other
Together they create their own symphony

The audience is captivated as they listen
Motionless they seem bound in mahogany
Eyes intent on the musician before them
His performance tonight fulfills his destiny
To become one the greatest pianists in the world
By the end of the performance he basks in victory

He rises and bows before the applause
I smile when I catch him looking at me
Then he brings his hand to his lips
Gently blowing me a kiss for all to see
Why do I love this man so?
He alone heard my heart’s tender plea



All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-17-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-07-17 09:38 PM


I'm in love with him too!  I love a man on a bench!!!!!!!

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

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2 posted 2001-07-17 09:44 PM


LoneWolf~
You are doing some beautiful things with your poetry ...
this is one of them !

'Motionless they seem bound in mahogany'
Brava !
~*Marge*~


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shadow974
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3 posted 2001-07-17 10:01 PM


Beautiful, playing the heart strings of love.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Logan
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4 posted 2001-07-18 12:40 PM


Ahh, LW, you plucked the piano strings of a wonderous feeling there..and the melody resounds to the heavens..very nice...very gentle smile
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5 posted 2001-07-18 01:22 AM


LW---I liked this so much!  Many years ago I sat while someone I loved played 'Moonlight Sonata' for my audience of one.  I will never forget how the moment filled every sense I had and this brought back the memory so clearly.  Thank you so much for this!
Suetang
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6 posted 2001-07-18 01:58 AM


Such an exquisite piece of writing this was, I was carried away with every word.  Thank you.  Take care......Sue

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7 posted 2001-07-18 03:07 AM


Ohh..This was just wonderful!
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8 posted 2001-07-18 03:12 PM


Perfect...James
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9 posted 2001-07-18 03:17 PM


Wonderful... a very nice read....


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10 posted 2001-07-19 09:09 AM


beautiful LW.....sooo beautiful done, love it.

Charisma

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11 posted 2001-07-19 01:06 PM


Jennifer, this is absolutely enchanting and beautiful. You're poetry just keeps wowing me!  It's a keeper  

Melissa~

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12 posted 2001-07-19 01:30 PM


Beautiful indeed..nicely written..
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13 posted 2001-07-19 02:36 PM




What a musical sweet piece.....

I applaud for the musician as well....

Thank you
***********************

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14 posted 2001-07-20 10:32 AM



*Bump*  

Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2001-07-20 09:49 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies.  I've been in a strange mood lately and I think my poetry is reflecting that.  Hope you all like it!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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