Open Poetry #14 |
A Single Candle |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A single candle in a darkened room, Doth offer hope despite the greater gloom And cause life's focused eye to settle there, The tiny flame so used to fight despair. The fragile filament to wind so fickle, The slightest wisp of breath to wick will tickle, Refuses with tenacity dark's cloak, Yet clings against it's end, a death of smoke. Instead it stands alone against the night, Indeed it seems to amplify it's light And in it's single function it is shown, Defiance against the dim but stands alone. And so adjust do we to it suffice, To keep the little flame at any price, For it is all we need to carry on, Until reliev'd spirit sees blazing dawn. Look ye! Look ye! From there into my heart, See thee the flame that's here and won't depart? Tis hope which won't extinguish in your night, Now use it please to be Loves guiding light. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha! I've seen a candle do just this for it had sweet a moment of bliss... Well done Sir! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..Shakespeare was a Texan? I bet he was!!! this is lovely. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."Tis hope which won't extinguish in your night"....what an awesome promise of love...oh were I to ever hear such words of love spoken...the hopeless romantic... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh you old softie you, this was very romantic indeed, well done Richard! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Romantic? Perhaps. Hopeless? Never! Thank you for your encouragement. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..an enjoyable read with a lot underneath the surface.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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