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spiked
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0 posted 2001-05-24 12:35 PM


So much have I accustomed to
These days and nights without you
It’s not that I no longer feel
Just time has taught me to conceal
And deal with moments as they come
No longer seeking where to run
Not intertwined in all that’s past
Not worried why it didn’t last
Rejoiced in having spent the time
The feeling and the state of mind.
A love so pure it cleansed to free
The anger that had long hurt me
And if in paths we cross again
With years that pass and hearts in mend
May love be just as good this time
As that with which we shared.


[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 05-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-05-24 01:03 AM


Hey.....beautiful.  
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2 posted 2001-05-24 01:19 AM


Spiked~
What a lovely, lovely render.
Enjoyed this very much.
~*Marge*~

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Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-05-24 01:48 AM


Yes it would be wonderful if you could gather back that which you let go...lovely Rich
spiked
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4 posted 2001-05-24 01:58 AM


Thank you Karen, marge and Paula
much appreciated

Temptress
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5 posted 2001-05-24 03:41 AM


As a good friend asked me tonight..
What if we were to have never known what we have lost?
You have pointed to this as well. There must be a theme somewhere on the breeze...

Wonderful writing...

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-06-19 10:03 AM


Back to the top...this is a timeless plea of inner healing! And hey? need a spray of some er...BACTINE?   okay...j/k...thought it deserved to spin again lovie!!!!!
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