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Were my heart the moon
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Were my heart the moon |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
 were my heart the moon thy love would be perilune thine heart to attune Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ra comes warm in sight seeking that which orbits night always on the run |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
were my heart the moon thy love would be perilune thine heart to attune ~*~ my heart is the moon love centering it's aura to energize thee ~*~ "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-12-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh my...this is lovely... very well done..imagery and vocab required impact acheived with a rhyme bonus very cool poet sir  |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Nice, short, and to the point. Beautiful. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Mucha's "Moonlight"...beautiful choice of picture--Lovely senryu. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ Egyptian sun god crossing sky in chariot seems to never tire nakdthoughts ~ my heart is the moon love centering it's aura to energize thee ~*~ I bask in moonglow nestled warmly in cockles in tune with the beat Janet Marie ~ I hope I didn't break a taboo with the rhyme. I just thought it would be fun Thank you for the warm comments. Secret Whisper ~ Thanx PM ~ Lovely comment and deeply appreciated Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
 Fantabulous!!! my perilune was out of tune, so I had to look up its meaning. My didtionary said to me, another word, I'm screaming for I knew that one not as well but now, I true can tell, the meaning for the newer word was in the book and not absurd thank you for fine vocabulaire it's better than a kitchen chair your senryu is superb, thy rhyming is fantastic and the stretch of my mind is always a good trick  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
truly beautiful |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful ...as always...helen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thou writest beautiful verse! All writing comes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely, Interloper,as was all poetic responses... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Circling closer Invading the space of one Loper has landed !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you all for your kind and wonderful comments. If anyone has taken offense with my works, comments, or replies I offer my sincerest apologies. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
*sigh* Lovely. |
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