Open Poetry #13 |
Dent de Lion |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dent de Lion There you were, golden maned popping up everywhere I looked as I leaned back yesterday, enjoying the warmth of an after rain. Drawing me to you, I plucked you from the meadows, beside the stream brushed you lightly against my cheek surprised at your softness, and how delicate you really were. All my life you were but a weed though cosmopolitan, and to some an herb, producing a dandy wine to drink or as is, edible to feast upon. I eyed you, held you, played with you studied your strong stem, your little hairs, fine tuned... breathed in scent of sweetness. Why was I so surprised... sensing your want of acceptance? Yesterday, you received mine. I kissed you with my lips and you left your tracings of gold upon them. A weed no more, I see the beauty in you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ written when I was MMoonchild...sighting my first Dandelion of 2000 4*2k "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ I am not lion ... this is dandy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Very nice. How fitting that after a very long break I come back to one of your pieces MMoonchild... Hehe, I'm glad I read it cause I never would have known it was you. Unrequited love sucks. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh my gosh ... I am popping this beauty back to the front lawn where it belongs !!!! GORGEOUS it still is~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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