Diastonene VI -- Cathrene Ponders

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

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0 posted 2002-08-23 02:50 PM

6. Cathrene Ponders

Cathrene sips again.
He thinks too much of her --
that Lord has lost his mind
for his Lady and her bees.

Once they were allowed,
all to show and sit
and spread their fired words
of family and now.

Lost among herself,
babbling about bees
like a child, like a child.
Cathrene sip sip sip.

The Lady lost her sadness.
Always held before.
Finding lovers in dead hallways.
Speaking fragment words to windows.

Such a disgrace, sip.
It's past time for them to go.
To take their leave, sip sip,
The money to split up.

She roves the hall as a ghost.
She roved to Robert once.
He has that way about him
with his silkened sickness.

She must have married madness.
Her mother too is losing light
and snoring all the time
in her horsey ways.

Yellow taste in back in mouth.
Sound of bees, even in here.
How did she join this fall?
How to escape its mouth?

Taste of teeth upon her glass.
She can taste its teeth.
Robert with his breath of flute.
The Lord a raving roving eye.

Lady perhaps a bird?
How long before she's stung?
Clicks her claws upon the glass?
She can taste its teeth.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

1 posted 2002-08-23 03:21 PM

Whoah, this has sooooooo changed.

Yummy!

Now more than Gorey, I'm getting the hyper-Gorey images that Mark Romanek produced in NIN's vid fr Perfect Drug. That dark blue and green, pensive and lost and so alone.

And when your poetry can give me images from my favourite music video director, that's goin' good, baby.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-23 06:02 PM

Ok, Ok, I think.....the butler did it. Yeah!

Really, though, this is an old brocade curtain light with dust in ray window suspend.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-08-24 03:09 AM

Lori's right
has changed
not better or worse
feels more intimate
conversational
but with same striking
glassy claws
This starts the new?
brian

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-08-26 12:57 PM

Lori, glad I could make you think of the director of the perfect drug.

Wranx, actually, it's occurred to me before that if this were actually taking place in England, where are the house servants? Then I realize, it's not taking place in England -- it's taking place in a dream, where all sorts of surreal disconnects like that are not just tolerated, but openly embraced.

Bri, perhaps I should have called this section Mikey Ponders, because I don't know where to go from here.

Yet.

.m.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

5 posted 2002-08-27 04:50 PM

Maybe I should have read the first 4...but this was coolies none the less!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-27 05:51 PM

It might help, DM, and it might not. Thanks for readin'!

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

7 posted 2002-08-28 09:22 AM

Great work!!!!

Enjoyed!

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel

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8 posted 2002-08-28 11:42 AM

Thanks, DDA.

bsquirrel

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9 posted 2002-08-28 04:05 PM

From 5. The Lady Dies /pip/Forum46/HTML/002454.html

To 7. The Lord Finds His Lady /pip/Forum46/HTML/002503.html

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 04:07 PM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-24 10:43 AM

My oh My . . . and here are three
Mikey where are the rest?
xxoo

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