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Dark Angel: The Chosen One ( 1 of 11 )
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Dark Angel: The Chosen One ( 1 of 11 ) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
This is the first of an 11 part series. This of course is not about me but about a fictional girl of my own making. But however real or unreal this may be it's a story that must be told to all that will listen. There once was a child chosen to be the most tormented and hated This is what was to be Soon the child grew older torment she knew well Then she finally realized her life was a living hell Now she struggles on being beaten everyday Knowing this pain would never leave This was no one special after all this no one was me There will be more to follow, the series is complete I need only post them. Most likely I'll do 2 at a time. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a pretty good introduction that makes me curious and interested...all sorts of questions are running through my mind now... i guess i will read on  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, another series writer!  Well, this is a great introduction to your series. It seems like it's going to be a sad but realistic series. This piece is very well-written, and I can't wait to see the rest! Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very powerful piece...i really liked the emotions...the came to me as soo real...this is a sad...as girl that lives in a reality of sincere blameless pain...just sad...thanks for sharing and hope to see more...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-26-2001).] |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yes...it baits, it interests...it addicts. Everything an introduction should do. Bravo! Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done and I'm looking forward to the rest.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Great! Another series!!  From what I have read here, many more fantastic pieces are to follow. The eyes will be kept open.  ~AF~ "I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist." |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was successful in getting my attention, so I will most definitely read the ones to follow!!! ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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