»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #12
»
Tiara of Love
| Open Poetry #12 |
|
Tiara of Love |
|
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
|
this poem is dedicated to suthern who loaned me the words and now I gift them back to her, with love. A tiara of love that gives me surcease From pain that I feel when alone A crowning gem in a jeweled masterpiece More than rubies or diamonds has shone A crown of delight surrounds now my face And allows me a moment to feel A glittering light shows love's end of race That me becomes us, makes me real A halo of gold a nimbus of pride That shows pure delight and what's more The dazzling bedeckment with fire astride Shows best when love holds the floor A tiara of love a crown of pure gold Is what I wear, when with you! With wondrous imagining and stories untold The glory of love that's so true In passion, in pride, I stand by your side And proudly I say, "yes I do!" Accepting your gift with arms open wide The jewel of love that is you Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, I enjoyed this very much! {~,^} |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You write about the tiara very well and I know you wear it very well....good writing! ethome. |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was a very beautiful write and I am sure that suthern will be honored that you dedicated it to her. Who wouldn't be with a piece as wonderful as this. The depth of your heart and pen show well in your writing. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, In passion, in pride, I stand by your side And proudly I say, "yes I do!" Accepting your gift with arms open wide The jewel of love that is you Beautiful writing my dear. Sy |
||
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, utterly beautiful love an absolutely perfect poem. You have written this sooooo well dear heart, so do you want praise as well love, are you sure! Oh Okay dear heart, but you know it's makes you blush. Wonderful as is your spirit shining through this love. Do I love it, YES, and isn't it a good job I'm not jealous of your ability love. A bit like the candle saying it's jealous of the sun but, still.  Absolutely fabulous Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This is just a beautiful product of inspiration ! Suthern will be delighted ! I'm delighted ! You've stretched and grabbed this crowning with poetic grace. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, Kethry... what an honor you've given me... and what a beautiful poem you've given to us all!!! I am simultaneously humbled and gratified that you took a phrase I used and created this wonderful poem... With a gift this lovely, feel free to use my words anytime!!! LOL suthern is indeed delighted... can you tell? *S* But to your credit, the poem would have earned my delight even without the dedication... Bless you, dear talented lady... and thank you! *S* And another big thank you to Marge, for pointing me this way... with only 20 minutes of library time (and no inclination to argue with my dinosaur computer *G*) I might not have seen this until Monday if you hadn't been kind enough to let me know. |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
My Thanks to everyone who responded and especially to suthern,(what goes around comes around hey!)*Grins* my friends have joy without end. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I had to come back for another read... and I'm impressed all over again. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-29-2001).] |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry, you and suthern wear the crown wonderfully. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
