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When A Woman Loves
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When A Woman Loves |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
When A Woman Loves… Look into the eyes of a man in love and you will find the soul of the woman that loves him Place your hand in the palm of his and you will fell the pulse of her open heart Lay your head upon his chest and in hearing the beating of his heart discover the seductiveness of her passion’s sighs Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh*Absolutely beautiful. This is so very heartfelt. I loved it. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ Oh, very pretty and very true. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Caress, you write with such softness..this poem is lovely. Nicely written. "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Startime, Thank you so much for the gracious response. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, thank you, your replies have been so thoughtful. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Poeminister, "you write with such softness" thank you soooo much for such a lovely response. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Whisper's Caress- ah yes...this is so beautiful, and, yes, so very true..  love it! CONGRATULATIONS ON HITTING 100 POSTS! ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I agree and I like this...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thank you both for being so kind. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lovely |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!! Denise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful! I loved it. A long time back I wrote one similar called "When A Man Loves" that I've never posted, so I'll go ahead and do so as an opposite to yours. Hope you don't mind. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Whisper's Caress, This is perfect. Simply beautiful writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sunshine, Denyse, thank you both so much. I love the comments. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
J, I would love to read your "When A Man Loves" thank you for the wonderful comments. Lonewolf, Thank you so much, I love the kind responses Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
OH MAN A Whispers Caress.... This really reached in and grabbed my heart. What an excellent piece you've created..... This one is certainly going into my library... Very well done! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
The magazine wants pieces about love and I would love to use this one if you wouldn't mind it going into the magazine. This is a wonderful piece. I will be thinking about this piece all night long. Thank you.. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is a soft piece, very nice. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AWC~ this is wonderful and a perfect match to JWesley's poem "When a man loves".... -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Gosh I am so humbled by the wonderful writers, you all have no idea how overwhelmed I am by the great responses to this piece. the magazine?? wow!!!! um which magazine? heehee Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very tender...i like a lot hugs, g (found a typo if its not too late to chng it...."and you will [FELL] the pulse of her open heart" )"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
The Digital Passions Magazine. May I please get your permission to use your piece in the Feb issue for poetry about Love? Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How true. How VERY true. Magnificent! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
oh my yes!!!! permission granted Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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