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Dr. Goose
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Dr. Goose |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Late yesterday I climbed a wall The wall that stood 100 foot tall With all that climbing I had done Expecting to have finally won I pulled and tugged then hurried down Lost my footing and fell on a frown I bounced back up to look at my self And found me hiding beneath a shelf Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great. . . loved the flow and the message. . . Wonderful. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Delightful ditty!!! I couldn't help but think of Vice President Gore. Hope for his sake he can pick himself up and find himself somewhere besides under the shelf. Well, at least in time. It would be really hard to go forward believing and having many believe in you, too, then to end up falling on a frown of your own or many. This is really heavy thinking compared to the lightness of your poem. It makes me think of Silverstein and Seauss all rolled into one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HM3~ Oh, it is so nice to see you back posting with us. This is just a lovely piece. Hope all is well and you have a joyous Holiday season. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Sven, thanks for the kind words. VAS, "It makes me think of Silverstein and Seuss all rolled into one." It was actually a cross between Mother Goose and Dr. Seuss Marge Thanks for remembering me. |
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