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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Distant Kisses All I see is that little picture It holds me close to you… You the voice and words of nether Beyond the touch of fantasy’s hue I often wonder how you feel, in rhythm of the lovers dual Those lips of rose petal sweetness, without their press, a death so cruel I kiss the image, my distant heart dream, This glass restrains your sweet imbue And still I feel your lover’s passion, behind the hardness of a cursed tube Do you think of sinful kisses? When lips will cross the space to you Do you dream of celestial visions, Polaris winks a subtle lover’s clue! There stands a place beyond horizons, where a winter and summer dance ensues There lives the light of a poets lover, who writes of distant kisses for you. James Parker Haley (c) Oct 19, 200 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a shooting star..a kiss from afar. lovely poem Parker..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ THIS IS SO ROMANTIC.....I loved it......**SIGH**......  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a dramatic display of passion, I really enjoyed this one. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is beautiful James! Seems so much of this going around.  Mr. Romance has come up with another swooning piece!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Parker...what a beautiful poem so sweet so tender yet so sad...loving a picture...I know the feeling darlin |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I often wonder how you feel, in rhythm of the lovers dual Those lips of rose petal sweetness, without their press, a death so cruel I kiss the image, my distant heart dream, This glass restrains your sweet imbue And still I feel your lover’s passion, behind the hardness of a cursed tube Do you think of sinful kisses? When lips will cross the space to you Do you dream of celestial visions, Polaris winks a subtle lover’s clue! ===================== mymymy ..ya know p-man, this is so soft, and sincere and sweet ... written with that sensitive gentle poets heart of yours... simply perfection from your poets pen ... the emotions, the imagery, the vocab choices.. every beautiful line .. very well thought out and written all of which is nothing less than we've come to expect when reading your poetry. this one goes in that special file of my favs by you ... and you already know how much I relate to this ones message.. yeah you know...moth to flame baby... shes a lucky lucky muse to inspire this in you. later-blowing kisses in the wind gator me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Parker---this was just a beauty of a present for someone, and no, I don't wanna know...I'll just read and enjoy...and computer screens taste awful. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Victoria, thank you very much. SEA, thank you. sighs and all. Irish Rose, thank you. Marina, thanks alot. Paula, the internet can be a curse at times. Janet, thank you my sweet friend. Sometimes I get ther inspiration going. serenity, yeah don't they. not as much fun as "Love bumps". Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very lovely, Romantic kisses,She is a lucky muse! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
**sighs** Wow Parker...this is one fine piece of weave, you know how to make a heart flutter!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, I almost transferred it to Adult when you started talking about her sweet imbue but I restrained myself You've got all the words, my friend, and you DO know how to use them well |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
little pictures do their dance wondering if theyll get the chance to become a freed and passionate bliss a kiss a kiss a kiss... PARKER..i love every line..each a spine tingler on its own...you know just how to hold a star, and sprinkle it in excess...  hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Distant Kisses All I see is that little picture It holds me close to you… You the voice and words of nether Beyond the touch of fantasy’s hue I often wonder how you feel, in rhythm of the lovers dual Those lips of rose petal sweetness, without their press, a death so cruel I kiss the image, my distant heart dream, This glass restrains your sweet imbue And still I feel your lover’s passion, behind the hardness of a cursed tube Do you think of sinful kisses? When lips will cross the space to you Do you dream of celestial visions, Polaris winks a subtle lover’s clue! There stands a place beyond horizons, where a winter and summer dance ensues There lives the light of a poets lover, who writes of distant kisses for you Parker~ This is absolutely devine...I bow to you, well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, so wonderful of you to drop in I miss that wonderful poetry of yours. Thanks. Butterflies, thank you sweetly. Bal, thank you sir.... got your heart ticking too did they.... dg, all my kisses will be in excess... Tracie, thank very much... Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sprinkle away then love...  my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
that sounds kinda kinky. Well who am I to argue with kinky. Parker |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- This is great...very sweet and romantic. Gotta love those distant kisses. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...kinky?? did someone say kinky??  my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Kinky?! Cool, I'm there  -SEA |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
and she dreams... |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Your poem is the personification of longing from afar. Tender, with a lovely touch of innocence...enough to melt any maiden's heart, I would think. Thank you. Rainydays |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Do you think of sinful kisses? When lips will cross the space to you Do you dream of celestial visions, Polaris winks a subtle lover’s clue!" Sigh ... just wonderful Parker, beautifully romantic sentiments ... such lovely thoughts this conjures up! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, yeah but that screen is starting to taste funny... dg... don't get so excited... and please take that whip out of your hand. SEA, oh no another one... this place is full of Dominatrix's.. I could be done for. dg, Rainydays, do you need some melting... Kit, thank you my dear. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- lol...i come back to check on you, and look what i find... my friend...if the screen is tasting funny then you're doing it all wrong..lol. don't give up...practice makes perfect. hugs, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sad, sweet, beautiful...I love it. I hope you two aren't apart too long. Dee |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...anyone up for practice??.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tricks maybe I should get the dust off the screen first... I remember the practice thing, I wish I had someone to practice with. Then I take this dang cowboy hat off. Dee, the internet is a curse to the imagination... reality is never as close as we want it. dg, practice... ok just lean over and put your lips on that screen. Parker |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Haleyja, the pleasure is mine tonite to read this one you have penned... My compliments to you on this tenderly written poem... Coco |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Talking about internet connection, I do believe Parker you were zapped by the screen! Great poem! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- lol..yeah...dusting off the screen is definitely a good place to start. as far as that practice thing goes, i think i might have a friend who could help you out with that...let me get back with you...lol hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
"Polaris winks a subtle lover’s clue!" Loved that line! My favorite star, yeppers, certainly is. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love it Parker! what illustrations... you have a poet's gift of words for sure and this one is no exception....I love the reflections and the depth of the questioning metaphors...you should be posting more...... Canuck...you're good!! |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Loved it. Melted me, grabbed my heart from me then I find out that it was only in cyberland. That was tough to cope with. If ones heart goes with that poem tied to great soft lips...send them this way my friend. PLY |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
CocoBaci, well thank you. Rosebud.. I do believe you are right. Thanks for the read. Vicky, yeah who do you think i've been kissing all this time.. Masked Intruder, thanks, my favorite star to write about too. ethome, thanks alot pal. I have to get to the coast for some more inspiration. Your lucky you live there. poetic_imperfection, yes this cyber stuff can be a curse on the heart and lips. Parker |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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